Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

[Sentus]

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(Sentus)
I’m the rawest to spit, about as flawless as it
Gets, so pay more attention or get lost in the mist
Not a coffin exists can keep me locked in its midst
I’ll swim to the bottom of loch ness and sit
Talk to the fish; ask em where the monsters at
Whip that bitches ass too n leave her on her back
I’m only harm for rap but I’m seekin a deal
And won’t stop till I rest in the Elysian Field
Cause even I feel that when the games on the line
You grip the pole tight so I’m keepin it real
You must be mistaken, you ain’t kill the beat
You were so boring on the mic that it’s still asleep
You’ll feel this heat the very second the base slams
A monster on the mic, the nerdlucks from space jam
I laugh at you faggots that keep playin my shit
Then try and talk crap about me but stay on my dick

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[Coleon]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

Dope shit right here. Warmin up for the next Studio Cypher. Pyromaniacs 2011 till Infinity.

[stillfli69]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

not bad at all, lyrics were dope for real. Sounds like the quality (mic etc.) could use some work, but flow and lyrics were tight keep it up!

[Pestrator]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

not bad bro this is good u did good on this freestyle imo ur flow didnt fit in that nicely wiht the ebat just cause it was roughe rn not so smooth and laied back but it was still good keep it up

[SkJayDubb]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

this is pretty dope! you sound a little like him to be honest.

[mykill]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

Flow: A-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 3/5, Why'd you stop? Seem to be riding a good vibe and a good flow for this one. I got kinda disappointed when it just...stops. Anyway, lyrically good, but I dunno. I've just heard you do that multi-syllable thingy rhyme scheme so much I think I'm bored of it. First 8 bars go hard as fuck though. Flow is good. Seems like you were stretching a bit for that "You grip the pole tight so I’m keepin it real" line.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

Good track bro. Think it wouldve been better if you hadnt doubled the vocals though, would had that more raw feel to it. The lyrics were great as always. My favorite line was And won’t stop till I rest in the Elysian Field. Nice. Can't wait to see what you'll do with our track.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

Thanks for the feed yall. @Mykill, I'm always going to do that multi syllable thing haha. I can't write a verse without multis, I think in multis. When I hear your guys' rap songs it doesn't sound like it rhymes at all to me haha. And I know I fucked up that line I don't know why I didn't just put "And when the games on the line I'm keepin it real" and made it one line. Wasn't thinking at the time. And this was just a hot 16 so I stopped after that. Next track will be much longer (shouts to Mc Crary)

[ATLien666]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

Niiice, like it.

Flow- Your best flow I think I heard (Don't hold me to that, ahah). 4.5

Lyrics- Always good, you're never a slacker on that. 4/5

Other- Quality kinda messes it up a lil', and like Mykill said, it's really short, you should've continued and killed this beat.

[Cli-City]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

Lyrics are good...but your flow sounds amateur...Good attempt though...

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

first lines was nice, then u fell off.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

Thanks for the listens.

And did you understand tha Elysian field line? Not many people have.