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  • Sentus- White & Blue

    I swear it flowed perfectly in my head...fuck my breath control



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    Sentus- White & Blue

    This is for the white and blue, for my brothers hard as steel
    So when they're on Harmon field that you know I'm fightin too
    Ignite ya crew as I'm spewin flames inside the booth
    I abuse the game cause I choose to reign with violent brute
    This divine spitter climbs quicker cause I rhyme sicker
    Your heart's big but don't start shit cause mines bigger
    I'm wreckin beats till legend's seen on my plaque
    So watch closely and see me etch my dream on the pad
    And if you're lucky I'll let you stand in the glow
    Or you can be just another victim stranded below
    One hand on my pencil, one hand on my throat
    As I carve my darkest fears in this canvas of hope
    Cause nowadays any kid'll start rappin at you
    But only a passionate few are really graspin the truth
    Who can say they have their heart attached to the booth
    And vow to spit till they're out and hit the max of their youth
    This is more than just music; it's the core of a movement
    To revolutionize thought and restore all that's prudent
    But life's a bitch, so I grab the whore and abuse it
    You do the same and when you listen ignore the pollution
    And how dare you come up to me and talk about Wayne
    Every time you speak it seems like I'm crossin out names
    You were so caught in trends you forgot about change
    And now we wonder adrift, lost without aim
    But I got the map in my hand; firm in my clutch
    And this has never once been about earnin some bucks
    It's about forging a dream with the birth of a trust
    So hopefully sometime soon you are learnin from us

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  • #2
    Re: Sentus- White & Blue

    Lyrics: 8/10

    Flow: 9/10

    Other: Damn, what can I say. You delivered. These are the kind of tracks I can bump. Lyrics are real as fuck. Keep it up. By the ways, your flow is dope.

    Gemma Arterton

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    • #3
      Re: Sentus- White & Blue

      What up though? New here and all that.
      Ok, so, first, this beat is WAY overused. I hope people on here try to stay away from it, to be honest.
      With that said... you did it justice, for the most part. I'd give it a solid 8/10
      8.5/10 for the lyrics
      6/10 for the flow.

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      • #4
        Re: Sentus- White & Blue

        Surprised to hear you go over something so mainstream Sentus, but you made it your own. Name sounds vaguely familiar. Mykill did a blue and white a couple of weeks back. Would this be about the air force base? Lyrics were good. Kinda hoping for a different rhyme scheme in your coming tracks though. A little diversity is always nice.

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        • #5
          Re: Sentus- White & Blue

          Thanks for the feed, white & blue is my high schools colors so that's why I did that.

          And I don't know what you mean by different rhyme scheme, all my songs have different rhyme schemes.

          http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
          http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

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          • #6
            Re: Sentus- White & Blue

            I like this out of all of your songs good shit man. 9/10.

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            • #7
              Re: Sentus- White & Blue

              this prolly your best song.

              u should drop a mixtape and more songs.

              YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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              • #8
                Re: Sentus- White & Blue

                Thanks, I probably won't drop a mixtape though untill I get good.

                http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
                http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

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                • #9
                  Re: Sentus- White & Blue

                  Bumpity Bump Bump look at Sentus go

                  http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
                  http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

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                  • #10
                    Re: Sentus- White & Blue

                    9/10 good shit
                    9/10 good lyrics
                    keep em comin

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                    • #11
                      Re: Sentus- White & Blue

                      Cheers for the feed

                      On this new cypher I think my flow is a lot better, my quality as it is mixed by me though...not so much

                      http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
                      http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

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                      • #12
                        Re: Sentus- White & Blue

                        I am shocked as fuck to see you go in on this song.

                        Flow- Best flow of yours yet, only time it was kinda off was at the end when the chorus came on. 3.5/5

                        Lyrics- Seriously, everything you do will get a 4 or a 5, aha. You're multis and internal rhyme scheme is nice as fuck. 5/5

                        Overall- 4/5


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