Me TRYING to imitate wayne....

[rookies]

Re: Me TRYING to imitate wayne....

9/10 this is not bad man
just need some better quality recording but sounds good

[KidComet]

Re: Me TRYING to imitate wayne....

the camera

did u have somebody hold the camera while u were rapping, or was it sitting on a camera stand??

Ohh sorry, for the long reply... i forgot about thiss..
Na I had the camera sitting

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: Me TRYING to imitate wayne....

Damn that was beast bro, I should come here check out songs more, 2nd thread I visit and another dope track!

[KidComet]

Re: Me TRYING to imitate wayne....

Damn that was beast bro, I should come here check out songs more, 2nd thread I visit and another dope track!

thankkss mann

[mykill]

Re: Me TRYING to imitate wayne....

I'm loose..

Flow: B
Lyrics: C-

Overall: 2.5/5, There are a variety of things that take away from making this awesome. First is the the effects used on the vocals, although they could have been tweeked to get them in the right area, as they stand they are kinda questionable. The reverb seems to be too high. How'd you record the vocals? Multiple tracks layered, paned etc? Either way, whomever is doing your mastering needs to tighten it up. Flow seems pretty on point, perfecting that always comes with the time and practice so I'm not knocking you at all there. Lyrically I think you could have come up with some better subject matter for verse two, the weakest of the two verses. Just left me thinking you were trying to sound as hard as you could, using ever swear word imaginable. Welcome to The Studio btw.

[KidComet]

Re: Me TRYING to imitate wayne....

Thanks for the constructive criticism man(: I really need it.