Im Comin Home Remix

[rookies]

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[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Im Comin Home Remix

4/5

dope song. was this originally jcole song???

i like the remix , but im sick of people goin over other people songs, i wanna hear some original songs.

[Coleon]

Re: Im Comin Home Remix

Good beat to go over.

I like the mixing. Good bounce in your vocals. You have good quality. Clear pronunciation and good flow but your delivery is kind of stale. Put more of your personality into it.

Pretty good for a short little thing. Keep it up.

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Im Comin Home Remix

Good beat to go over.

I like the mixing. Good bounce in your vocals. You have good quality. Clear pronunciation and good flow but your delivery is kind of stale. Put more of your personality into it.

Pretty good for a short little thing. Keep it up.

Basically what I was about to say lmao, co-sign what Coleon said, there's a slight lack of personality but otherwise it's very solid. 4/5

[rookies]

Re: Im Comin Home Remix

Thanks for the feedback. i'll work on my delivery

[ATLien666]

Re: Im Comin Home Remix

Flow- Nice, but you don't have much of a delivery, work on that and it'll be perfect.

Lyrics- Did good, seems like you just said, "Fuck it," at the end though.

Other- Really good mixing.

Overall- 4/5

[mykill]

Re: Im Comin Home Remix

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 4/5, Not bad at all. Agree with Coleon, vocals sound really f'n good - mastering wise. Lyrics are always good, though some spots seem like you're stretching it (mostly before the hook). Keep the tracks coming!

[rookies]

Re: Im Comin Home Remix

thanks bro

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 4/5, Not bad at all. Agree with Coleon, vocals sound really f'n good - mastering wise. Lyrics are always good, though some spots seem like you're stretching it (mostly before the hook). Keep the tracks coming!