Tha Studio Cypher 2 (Voting!)

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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LWHQ studio feed imitation "Dope bro 4/5"

lmao , i've seen that exact feedback so many times in this forum on everyone's songs.

[Cody]

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Voted Blanco

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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Voted Blanco

what caught u with his verse?? flow?? lyrics?? delivery?? or is he just your favorite??

no beef ...... just asking??


ALSO WHO THE FUCCK Is PDUB??? He shittin on everybody right now, and i never seen pdub post in the forums lol.

[THA GR8 M8]

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Your writing wasn't any different but your flow at the beginning was rushed.

I could blow smoke up your butt or do a LWHQ studio feed imitation "Dope bro 4/5" but I want you to improve.

Yeah I understand bro. Honestly feedback from you and Sentus, I always take into consideration fully cause I respect you two as MC's. I thought I had a few nice lines (Ex. Tinker Bell/Never Ever Land... a deal), but I'll try harder next time I guess.

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ALSO WHO THE FUCCK Is PDUB??? He shittin on everybody right now, and i never seen pdub post in the forums lol.

Hes 1 half of The Rookies. They post in here frequently.

[Cody]

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what caught u with his verse?? flow?? lyrics?? delivery?? or is he just your favorite??

no beef ...... just asking??


ALSO WHO THE FUCCK Is PDUB??? He shittin on everybody right now, and i never seen pdub post in the forums lol.

I just liked his verse more than everybody's...

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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I just liked his verse more than everybody's...

cool

[mykill]

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Can I get some feed? *Kanye Shrug*

What's with all of this beef.

bout shit myself laughing after reading all that nonsense before it, lol

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Instinct - Getting better with the flow/delivery. Good effort. Make sure you work on those two elements of your rap and better improve on em. Lyrics were good, but with time you can kick that up a few notches as well.

Noble - Agree with the previous comments about his flow being off at points.

Artille - Got my vote. Hands down. Was it the lyrics? Prolly. Flow? Maybe, off at points but still a maturing flow. Delivery? Presence? Hmmm... All possibilities but for a man's first effort at something, that shit was fuckin bonkers. If that's a first time recording effort, think of what it'll be like when you put lyrics like that to a dope ass flow and a dope as mic presence.

Coleon - Good, Great even, but something didnt sell it for me. Best lyrics though

Sentus - Great Lyrics, but off flow. You already know that though.

PDub (of the Rookies) - Good deal right here. Thinking a presence/delivery problem if I had to point something out.

Diezel - Your flow was kinda rushed. Ad-lib echo was kinda annoying

Blanko - Nice as hell. Blank Deezy always one of the coldest dudes on the mic.

[Pestrator]

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Allright so heres my fb:
Artille: Wow bro im impressed, this was one of ur first songs, great job for that! Your lyrics were decent nothing wow worthy but it got the job done, ur flow was on point the whole time basically.
Coleon: I think ur verse was the bes ur flow on this whole thing was the best as well as ur emotion put into it. Your lyrics were goodd too i like the Tinker Bell line, that line stuck with me.
Indiglo: not a bad verse bro, u need to work on ur emotion to make it sound more like entertainning but it wasnt a bad try, keep it up bro!!
Lil Blanco: pretty good lyrics as well but not so many wow lrics as I expected you to have and ur flow was a lil off at times. Good entree though!
Noble: i liked ur lyrics but imo ur flow was off, like it was too rushed and kinda chopy imo ik u can do better bro but good try bro, no hate at all.
PDub: this entree is mad good bro ur flow is smooth and on point almost all throughout except for the ending u kinda feel off bc u went a lil too fast, the lyrics were good but nothing wow worthy, keep it up.
Pyro: This wasnt a bad entree but it wasnt great. I liked the bars u did be4 the drums hit, but ur flow was a bit boring. Keep it up though!
Snetus; Ur lyrics were good but I wasnt digging ur flow, imo it was off not all the time but it was wasnt on point all throughout but as u kept going in ur verse it got better. You started rapping alil too fast imo, but not bad entree keep it up!
Youneek: ur flow was on point but I didnt love the lyrics, they were a bit overused like the life is a bitch line but not bad keep it up!
Young Corruption: I couldnt view yours and im sorry, I dindt dl the lyrics werent bad, nothin special though and its not my style of lyrics.
Yung Diezel: Wasnt really diging ur entree u were off beat at times but lyrics werent bad, nothing wow like.
Ziggy: i liked ur entree bro, mastering could have been better but ur flow fit the beat well.


My entree goes with Coleon, good job guys, I think im a oin yall on the next cypher!

[THA GR8 M8]

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Coleon: I think ur verse was the bes ur flow on this whole thing was the best as well as ur emotion put into it. Your lyrics were goodd too i like the Tinker Bell line, that line stuck with me.
Noble: i liked ur lyrics but imo ur flow was off, like it was too rushed and kinda chopy imo ik u can do better bro but good try bro, no hate at all.

Thanks, but I think that your were referring to my Tinker Bell link, I'm lost.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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FUCK THIS SHIT LOL

I Should've did mine earlier so i could edit it and did more takes.

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Yung Diezel: Wasnt really diging ur entree u were off beat at times but lyrics werent bad, nothing wow like.

what do yall be expecting wit lyrics to be "wow like"

i had some of the best lyrics in this, fuck that.

[Coleon]

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Thanks, but I think that your were referring to my Tinker Bell link, I'm lost.

Lmao yeah idk either bro

[Z!Greatest]

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FUCK THIS SHIT LOL

I Should've did mine earlier so i could edit it and did more takes.

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what do yall be expecting wit lyrics to be "wow like"

i had some of the best lyrics in this, fuck that.

If it's any consolation, if that's you in your sig then I nominate you for best hairstyle, hands down