Tha Studio Cypher 2 (Voting!)

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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Coleon is also pretty good even though he hates me

why does coleon hate you???


and thanks for the vote.

[MC_Crary]

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Artille: Had a grat flow. Especially for your what, second song? I wish you'd post more man. You could be great.
Coleon: You have the best delivery in Tha Studio man. You rode the beat all the way through and your lyrics were good too. You might even be on Royce' status. Dope song bro lol.
Indiglo: You had a good flow and even pretty good lyrics. Felt like you couldve put more emotion into it. Heard a few mess ups towards the end. The adlibs were weird too.
Lil Blanko: Perfect flow as always. Liked the pissin bleach line too. Sounded like a freestyle. Good one man.
Noble: So your flow really intrigued me. So far you probably have the best battle bars. Like you went hard man. Is the two bars about cigarettes talking about them affecting your breath control cause if so I totally understand man. And if you pay six dollars a pack gotta be smoking Newports. First couple of bars seemed really rushed but overall your lyrics were on bar with Coleon, just his flow beat yours out.
P-Dub: Flow could've been better. Lyrics were ok.
Sentus: So not much not much to say, most of your pit falls you know. Liked that grade a/grey day line. Sick man.
You-Neek: Know its one of your first tracks but the mastering could use work. That comes with time though. Flow was good, still feelin the accent.
Young Corruption: I've heard better from you man. Mastering needs major work. Alo, youre still not filling out your bars. Trust me it'll work wonders for your flow.
Yung Diezel: First off, it's Sharoyce Tha Don lol. Jk. Nice man. Don't know, it was good, but I think you saying it was just something quick you threw together is untrue. Sorry just my opinion. You had some nice wordplay and good lines but were sprinkled with thie overused style. Such as the i'm go in like i forgot to leave. Kinda over nigga's goin in lol. I mean I've even said it on some tracks but it's an overused filler word. ANd I'm the shit. And spittin crack. Great flow though
Ziggy: This is the first track Ive heard from you I think. You had a good flow, liked it very different. SOme lines were nice but other than the flow I wasn't really feeling it man. The delivery didnt do it for me. Sorry.

So my vote would have to go Coleon. Overall he had the best track. My favorites were Coleon, Lil Blank, Artille, and Noble.

[Young Corruption]

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Young Corruption: I've heard better from you man. Mastering needs major work. Alo, youre still not filling out your bars. Trust me it'll work wonders for your flow.

for some reason every time i see a feedback from you and Mykill. it stings more than when other ppl tell me what i'm doing wrong.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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for some reason every time i see a feedback from you and Mykill. it stings more than when other ppl tell me what i'm doing wrong.

damn lol

[Artille]

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for some reason every time i see a feedback from you and Mykill. it stings more than when other ppl tell me what i'm doing wrong.

That's just because they give in depth feedback and tell you ways to improve on it. Most people will just tell you practice more, but they really know exactly what you need. I wouldn't take offense, but it's a good thing it stings because that means you read it and hopefully understand it to improve on your flaws in the future.

[MC_Crary]

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for some reason every time i see a feedback from you and Mykill. it stings more than when other ppl tell me what i'm doing wrong.

Alright man, basically its like this. You have the name Young Corruption. You seem to have great enthusiasm for hip-hop and making music. From the lyrics you spit on Redemption, seems like you have a very important story to tell. But your music hasn't been living up to your name. There are flashes of what your music could be but youre wishy washy. I don't write on everyone's threads but I listen to 99.5 % of the music in Tha Studio and I'm pretty sure I've heard every song you've dropped here. Some songs were terrible and some show that glimmer of what you could be and then you'll drop another song that makes me wonder if you listen to your track before you put it out. I mean we all have mastering mistakes but your verse here, the volume was very low. Almost couldn't hear you. Makes me think you don't listen to the feedback we give you. Your flow could definately be helped by filling out your bars with more words, or maybe bigger words.Your lyrics dont have to be al multi-syllabled and use big words and shit, but when you dont have enough words for the bar you have to stretch words and leave gaps that fuck up your flow. Remember to check out your song's before you release em, make sure your eq and compression and shit is right. Noise reduction would help with that static. Or maybe you have a setting on you daw (i think you said you use mixcraft right?) that removes whats caled 60 hz. Its that noise you hear on recordings from the electrical currents in the room. It would be under an equalizer setting. Also WavePad Sound Editor could work wonders for your vocal tracks. Even with the cheapest microphones, mastering can make it sound great. Not dissing your mic, don't know what you have, just a tip. Ok, I'm done. The moral of the story, guessing I can speak for mykill here and say we're not trying to be douche bags, just to help you improve.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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Alright man, basically its like this. You have the name Young Corruption. You seem to have great enthusiasm for hip-hop and making music. From the lyrics you spit on Redemption, seems like you have a very important story to tell. But your music hasn't been living up to your name. There are flashes of what your music could be but youre wishy washy. I don't write on everyone's threads but I listen to 99.5 % of the music in Tha Studio and I'm pretty sure I've heard every song you've dropped here. Some songs were terrible and some show that glimmer of what you could be and then you'll drop another song that makes me wonder if you listen to your track before you put it out. I mean we all have mastering mistakes but your verse here, the volume was very low. Almost couldn't hear you. Makes me think you don't listen to the feedback we give you. Your flow could definately be helped by filling out your bars with more words, or maybe bigger words.Your lyrics dont have to be al multi-syllabled and use big words and shit, but when you dont have enough words for the bar you have to stretch words and leave gaps that fuck up your flow. Remember to check out your song's before you release em, make sure your eq and compression and shit is right. Noise reduction would help with that static. Or maybe you have a setting on you daw (i think you said you use mixcraft right?) that removes whats caled 60 hz. Its that noise you hear on recordings from the electrical currents in the room. It would be under an equalizer setting. Also WavePad Sound Editor could work wonders for your vocal tracks. Even with the cheapest microphones, mastering can make it sound great. Not dissing your mic, don't know what you have, just a tip. Ok, I'm done. The moral of the story, guessing I can speak for mykill here and say we're not trying to be douche bags, just to help you improve.

good shit,
give me an in depth artist analysis too. u and mykill good at that shit. (no sarcasm)
its good yall got the patience for that.
i'll give you an analysis as well if u want, or anybody else that wants my full analysis can ask.

[Z!Greatest]

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good shit,
give me an in depth artist analysis too. u and mykill good at that shit. (no sarcasm)
its good yall got the patience for that.
i'll give you an analysis as well if u want, or anybody else that wants my full analysis can ask.

I'll take you up on that analysis if it's all the same to you

[ProBitaz.]

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Dunno what to vote.. Every's crazy man.. I think I'll just vote randomly then.

[Coleon]

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Thanks for the vote Crary

[A$AP YAMS]

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Voted Artille.


"Lets just call you Tinker Bell, you'll never ever land a deal"
- Noble

"So call me Al-Shoaibi; I’m the sickest rapper left
Kill me and I’ll still flip on you . . . after death"
- Sentus

" Imma G, like the 7th letter, when I die, no lie, Imma make heaven better."
- Yung Diezel

I liked those lines

[Z!Greatest]

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I'd like to thank whoever gave me my second vote, even though I'm not really in contention now it's much appreciated, cheers