Tha Studio Cypher 2 (Voting!)

[Young Corruption]

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Alright man, basically its like this. You have the name Young Corruption. You seem to have great enthusiasm for hip-hop and making music. From the lyrics you spit on Redemption, seems like you have a very important story to tell. But your music hasn't been living up to your name. There are flashes of what your music could be but youre wishy washy. I don't write on everyone's threads but I listen to 99.5 % of the music in Tha Studio and I'm pretty sure I've heard every song you've dropped here. Some songs were terrible and some show that glimmer of what you could be and then you'll drop another song that makes me wonder if you listen to your track before you put it out. I mean we all have mastering mistakes but your verse here, the volume was very low. Almost couldn't hear you. Makes me think you don't listen to the feedback we give you. Your flow could definately be helped by filling out your bars with more words, or maybe bigger words.Your lyrics dont have to be al multi-syllabled and use big words and shit, but when you dont have enough words for the bar you have to stretch words and leave gaps that fuck up your flow. Remember to check out your song's before you release em, make sure your eq and compression and shit is right. Noise reduction would help with that static. Or maybe you have a setting on you daw (i think you said you use mixcraft right?) that removes whats caled 60 hz. Its that noise you hear on recordings from the electrical currents in the room. It would be under an equalizer setting. Also WavePad Sound Editor could work wonders for your vocal tracks. Even with the cheapest microphones, mastering can make it sound great. Not dissing your mic, don't know what you have, just a tip. Ok, I'm done. The moral of the story, guessing I can speak for mykill here and say we're not trying to be douche bags, just to help you improve.

i don't think ya'll are douche bags cause i meant what i said it in a good way. like that feeling you get when you disappoint someone and your kinda down on your self and i'll admit recording the song my mic was acting up cause no matter what i did the sound just wasn't right and i was getting mad cause i have been trying to record the damn thing for a good hour trying to get it to sound good but just gave up after a while. i get what you mean throughout your paragraph and i'ma try it out on the next song i release to try and prove that i do listen to the criticism and everything

[rookies]

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good shit,
give me an in depth artist analysis too. u and mykill good at that shit. (no sarcasm)
its good yall got the patience for that.
i'll give you an analysis as well if u want, or anybody else that wants my full analysis can ask.

same here. i appreciate te analysis yall give me. workin hard at it. ima try to give better feedback too

[THA GR8 M8]

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At least people are feedbacking eachother and being civil, keep it this way.



Don't forget to vote if you haven't too!

[Coleon]

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Bump n grind.

When's the voting end?

[Young Corruption]

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Bump n grind.

When's the voting end?

it ends sunday and winner will be announced monday. thats what the other thread says

[THA GR8 M8]

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it ends sunday and winner will be announced monday. thats what the other thread says

Yep, this. But I still hope we get some more votes by then though. Last time we had like 30+ and this time its like the same. I wanted to increase that.

[Young Corruption]

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Artille: damn for the first time recording. well i remember you dropped
something a really long time ago but that was a good verse. mixing could use work and some with the flow but you
really impressed me on what i heard

Coleon: your lyrics were the thing that really impressed me and the mixing was very good, your flow was on point as far as i hear
i liked your verse and really have nothing bad to say about it cause you killed that shit

Indiglo: it was a good verse. it was really low volume wise and nothing really stood out to me

Lil Blanco: another one that is good. god i feel like i'm one of the worse in HQ. mixing and everything was good. again nothing really
stood out to me lyrics wise

Noble: well you already know what i think lol

Pdub: never heard anything from you before this. i like the optmus prime line that was good. i really like your verse. this
is gonna be a hard desicison to make and i'm like half way through

Pyro: i think i've heard a couple of things from you. i honestly could barely hear your song. but the parts i did hear
they sound good. good mixing as well and everyone has been on point so far

Sentus: i've always liked your lyrics you never dissappoint it that aspect."So call me Al-Shoaibi; I’m the sickest rapper left
Kill me and I’ll still flip on you . . . after death" beastly right there

YouNeek: i like your name lol. first time i'm heard from you and i was impressed you were unique to say the least lol.
your lyrics were good. nothing stood out for me atleast.

Yung Diezel: You crack me up sometimes but when it comes to your music you are good and the last couple of bars were the best

Ziggy: your mixing could use work, but i like your voice. lyrics were pretty good but i think you could do better. you need a
little push lol

[Sentus]

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You knew who Al Shoaibi was? Props.

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Here are my thoughts. If you're a sensitive bitch than don't read.

Artille- Vocals were way too loud I thought, they stood out from the beat too much, didn't blend in. Didn't like the flow in the begining at all but then it got better. Lyrics were blah too, use some multis or experiment with wordplay more. Delivery/Quality was good though so it was pleasant to the ear and easy to listen to. Plus I really liked the part that started with "better than all" and that whole scheme.

Indiglo- Lyrics were different than most people here so I'll give you props on that. Still need to up the rhymes though, expecially if you want to continue with that style. No problems with the delivery I dig it. Flow was great up until candle lit. Shouldn't have took such a long pause and then the rest after that was ehh. I deff like your style though, keep it up

Lil Blanco- Like always, flow/delivery/presence on the mic is great. You got that down pat. Lyrics were probably a C though. You could deffinitely do better in that aspect but it was still better than most people here.

Noble- Sorry bro but your verse was deffinitely off beat about half the time. Message of the song was great though and I loved the Dreezy disses.

PDub- Clean delivery, that was good, you could have had some more emotion though. Lyrics were average, you had some decent rhymes but no stand out lines. Boring verse overall but if you keep working you can get better.

Pyro- Delivery was not good. It sounded like you recorded this at a funeral and you were sad and tried to record really quietly so no one else could hear you. Couldn't even pay attention to lyrics.

YouNeek- I didn't like the overdubs you did. They didn't match the original vocals and it just sounded weird. Some of the lyrics really didn't make sense and the rhymes were very simple. I feel like a broken record but use some better rhymes schemes.

Young Corruption- Need to turn your vocals way up. And put any emotion into your voice whatsoever. Most people probably didn't but I liked your style man haha, it's different compared to the rest here but you deffinitely need to up the lyrics if you want to stand out cause a lot of people do that style and are a lot more complex.

Yung Diezel- You had good swag and delivery but that's it...your voice was too loud and didn't blend in with the beat at all. I thought the lyrics were whack but that's what you like to do so fuck it, keep doing you.

Ziggy-I loved your delivery and you deffinitely had good emotion in your voice but you need better quality haha, we're both in the same boat.

[Coleon]

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Artille - Your flow is quite nice but you lack energy so it sounds like a mumble at times. Your flow is definitely your strong point. Nice rhymes but not much else lyric wise.

Indiglo - Delivery was your downfall. Your lyrics were acceptable so just work on writing your flow better to the beat so you don't have any pauses. More energy in the beat and you're straight.

Lil Blanco - Best delivery in the whole cypher. Lots of personality in this, or swag if you prefer, and I dig it. Cockiness is key. Good voice and flow. Lyrics were alright.

Noble - I already touched on your flow in my original post so I'll just say your punch concepts were very nice but the execution was sloppy. You could incorporate more multies into your verse by doing things such as changing "Lets just call you Tinker Bell, you'll never ever land a deal" to "You're Peter Pan for real cause you'll Never Land a deal". Keep it up bro. Keep elevating.

PDub - Your voice reminds me of Mikill. I like the personality in this. Your lyrics were kind of corny at times. You wrote to the beat really well though.

Pyro - I liked the approach you took to this and better lyrics than most. Just put more energy into it cause it sounded like a dull mumble or maybe mix louder.

YouNeeK - Really monotonous delivery, Flow was acceptable. Maybe mix the vocals a bit louder.

Young Corruption - I didn't like the melody you carried with your voice. It sounded like a nursery rhyme. At least you took an original approach though. The flow was alright but corny due to the melody. Just go more convential next time and maybe throw in a couple bars like the ones in this.

Young Diezel - Pause punchlines are the lowest form of rap. Your flow was nice but you wrote it kind of weird to the beat, still good. Delivery was nice and cocky. Can't really comment on the lyrics because we wouldn't agree. I'd just add a tad bit more originality next time.

Ziggy - I think your delivery and rawness fit the beat's atmosphere more than alot of the other entries. Mixing and quality was bad so that was your main problem.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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Artille - not bad for first recording. keep it up.

Coleon - already gave an anaylysis.

Indiglo - nice voice and presence. lol @ the last few verses. i liked it though.

Lil Blanco - nice flow.

Noble - nice emotion and delivery. flow fell off at some parts, but overall good.

PDub - nice voice and delivery. when u say the word "ass" u say it wit a lisp lol. it puts more

character in it, good shit.

Pyro - i like the raspy voice. work on a consistant flow, and your shit would be dope. sounded

kinda like u were reading.

Sentus - lol, u always come wit dat same voice and energy and flow with the same tone and

cadence. u mastered it though, good verse.

YouNeeK - lmao, i enjoyed this verse the most. that voice/accent is crazy, i like the voice and

swagg, good shit. my favorite verse.

Young Corruption - i like this shit. i like how u flowed with the piano melody, thats unique,

good shit. and lol at the topic, it goes with the mood though.

Yung Diezel - IMTHESHIT.COM

Ziggy - nice energy and flow. good shit.

[epeezy]

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I voted for Coleon. Thought he killed it.

[THA GR8 M8]

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I voted for Coleon. Thought he killed it.

Thanks for taking the time to listen and vote!

Gunna end the voting in a bit btw.