Moment 4 Life (Rough Snippet Cover)

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Moment 4 Life (Rough Snippet Cover)

01-22-2011, 04:44 AM

I am using this track for my mixtape, i'm putting out soon,.. and I wanted some opinions on what I've got so far.
Show Love &/OR Hate.
-LaNNy

(PS. Just started rapping couple weeks ago)

YouTube - MOMENT 4 LIFE (COVER) ROUGH

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01-22-2011, 09:06 PM

Re: Moment 4 Life (Rough Snippet Cover)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 3.75/5, I can't lie, this beat is kinda ridiculous.... Now that that's said, your flow is really really good. You need to put that emotion in there though so that all your "wow" punchlines will hit the listener with more force. Lyrics are good, but nothing buzz worthy. Welcome to the Stu'. Keep posting and keep commenting.

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