Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

[ATLien666]

So I'm done recording those disney/nick songs, and will be back to my normal shit, lmao.

So anywho:
YouTube - Love The Way You Lie pt II remix- Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...z-h-a-m-2.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...eatshop-2.html

[ATG]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

lyrics: were on point
flow: a bit choppy in some parts and in others a little to off beat.
needs a little more emotions.
0verall3/5

[ATLien666]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

Thanks for the feed, and I think my old mic has something to do with it, I can't really flow naturally on it, but thanks again for checking it out!

[mykill]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 3/5, You got a pop filter? I could hear 'plosives'. Your vocal delivery was great, but that off-beat flow is still there. the work you've been doing on it shows, but its still there. like you'd two bars well, then the next two would be rushed and you could of waited and paused a second. Maybe its a lyric thing, like you're writing too many words for the bar

[ATLien666]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 3/5, You got a pop filter? I could hear 'plosives'. Your vocal delivery was great, but that off-beat flow is still there. the work you've been doing on it shows, but its still there. like you'd two bars well, then the next two would be rushed and you could of waited and paused a second. Maybe its a lyric thing, like you're writing too many words for the bar

I did, but I had to resort to using my old mic, since my new one broke. Thanks for noticing that I've been trying, aha, but I do think it has something to do with me putting too many words for the bar. I'll try to work on that.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

dope shit, i like these mashups u do.

u sayin this your last disney song ??

lyrics and flow on point. sometimes too many words, but still good.

4.5/5

[ATLien666]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

dope shit, i like these mashups u do.

u sayin this your last disney song ??

lyrics and flow on point. sometimes too many words, but still good.

4.5/5

Appreciate it! and yeah, I'm just done posting them on here, really.

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

I dug it, even though it came in a bit rough, like her bit just cut and yours came in instead of a natural change lol.

On a random note, I'm fucking jealous like a mutherfucker of your hair. Shit is how I want mine....only I'm white lol

Anyways I liked the lyrics etc, and the flow seemed to be playing catch up once or twice but was overall solid.

I liked it, and that singer is class too.

[ATLien666]

Re: Ariana Grande ft. Yung Cash- Love The Way You Lie pt. II.

Yeah, the editing was rough, since I had to blend the instrumental and ariana's version.

Ahaha, right on, but shit, you can still grow yours out, it just takes forevvver.

Right on for the solid feedback, I appreciate it!

And hell yeah, I love Ariana Grande.