Pyro - The Facade

[xXPyroXx]

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[WKinhere]

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its cool but i dont think you should try to sing. love the blink-182 stuff tho.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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lyrics and emotion was on point as always.
flow fit this as well.
i like that beat, i remember when that original song came out, it was one of my favorites.

u gotta tweak that autotune a little though, or just go without it.

overall 3/5 good job. keep it up

[Gibbsy]

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Nahh the singing ent your thing man :/ aha ,
but i like the combo sounds that shit is nice, your flow is nice & Lyrics are on point you kinda sound a lil nasally tho :S maybe thats jus me but rap more from ure throat man
overall 4/5 man nice work keep grindin

[xXPyroXx]

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well its pretty clear i shouldnt sing lol thanks really appreciate ye taking the time to listen to it

[The ColourBlind Kid]

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well its pretty clear i shouldnt sing lol thanks really appreciate ye taking the time to listen to it

do wat u wanna do dawg, i lik ur shit keep hustlin hard

[Explicit]

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i liked this, it was good... i love it when rock gets mixed with hip hop anyway the singing was a little off, but if you keep practacing you should get better... 3.5/5

P.S. could you check my new track out?
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...rd-liquor.html

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro - The Facade

i liked this, it was good... i love it when rock gets mixed with hip hop anyway the singing was a little off, but if you keep practacing you should get better... 3.5/5

P.S. could you check my new track out?
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...rd-liquor.html

thanks man plus i think your shit is pretty good too

[Artille]

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This is a lot different than anything I've seen on here in a long time. I agree with Explicit, I also love it (probably why Linkin Park is my favorite band, well their old shit). Very good production on this too, like the adlibs during the chorus. Quality was pretty good overall, it's just some bars it's hard to understand exactly what you're saying. When it comes to your flow I could see a couple questionable bars in the first verse, but other than that you were very consistent. Lyrically you were on point all of the way through and the chorus is very good. I like the bridge near the end. I enjoyed this track, if only vocals were a bit higher, quality a tad better, and a little better singing on the chorus (it's still pretty good cause of the autotune or whatever) I would have gave it a 5, but I'm gonna give you a 4.5/5

Keep it up and try and check out my collabo with THP "In the Sun" if you would. I would greatly appreciate it.

[xXPyroXx]

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This is a lot different than anything I've seen on here in a long time. I agree with Explicit, I also love it (probably why Linkin Park is my favorite band, well their old shit). Very good production on this too, like the adlibs during the chorus. Quality was pretty good overall, it's just some bars it's hard to understand exactly what you're saying. When it comes to your flow I could see a couple questionable bars in the first verse, but other than that you were very consistent. Lyrically you were on point all of the way through and the chorus is very good. I like the bridge near the end. I enjoyed this track, if only vocals were a bit higher, quality a tad better, and a little better singing on the chorus (it's still pretty good cause of the autotune or whatever) I would have gave it a 5, but I'm gonna give you a 4.5/5

Keep it up and try and check out my collabo with THP "In the Sun" if you would. I would greatly appreciate it.

Awh man I really apreciate the effort you put into that message it's nice to be noticed
I love linkin parks old stuff too that's wat inspired me, that plus "knock out" by wayne, I hope u keep an eye on my new stuff and ya man I'll check out your song

[mykill]

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Flow: C
Lyrics: B-

Overall 2.75/5, I'm not going to say like others and say singing isnt your think. Autotune is not everyone's thing. I dont like autotune. But sometimes, in some instances, I think it has valid use and works well. For this song? Not really, but there still are some positives here that make up for it. The concept for this song is great. Lyrics seem to be on point and good substance that help push the song forward. As far as the delivery and effort to make it work, I think you could go back to the boards and do better. One tip I can give you is that harmonzing is the key to singing. Listen to some R&B songs, or good rock songs. There's always background vocals, and that's what makes the song pop, the lyrics pop, and everything work well together. Good effort man. I hope you work on it and continue the trend cause you're not that bad of a singer.

[xXPyroXx]

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