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    Whatever Life Brings
    - Jay Tunes -

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    I was gone for a minute because I was focusing on school and other shit. plus my PC broke! But I'm tryna put some shit together again, just for fun. I wrote & recorded it today, so check this out... first song in like 6+ of not picking up a pen


    Thanks for the constructive feedback.

    Lyrics:

    S-so I woke up this morning, felt like writing and recording
    So im here spittin shit that is real and never boring
    Somedays I feel like im on top soaring
    And others I feel way below, like im in hell exploring
    Friends are telling me that im not same
    That im just jay tunes, aka the lame
    Im starting to believe it, and im the one to blame
    The truth is im just tryna get a name, but I don’t want no fame
    Im a lyrical beast that needs to be tamed
    Haters wanna bring me down, so at my heart they aim
    Im full of emotions sometimes I don’t wanna have
    Like being alone, me minus you.. just do the math
    I dont trust people, like what the fuck is the catch
    Im so hurt but I put a fight, and try to win the match
    And I try to be the best at everything I do
    I try to stay real on every single rap I do
    I just try to be no one but the man in the mirror
    When I think about it,it makes my crazy dreams seem nearer
    And I just smoke so my thoughts get lil clearer
    But I might quit since music is a lot better
    There’s a meaning behind every syllable and letter
    Some cats don’t like my songs, but I don’t care it doesn’t matter
    I already know that you aint better, plus im a go getter
    And im much clever, and ima be myself forever
    Cause that’s really just how I think
    Live life cus itd cou be gone in a blink
    Random thought.. uhmm I really wanna get inked
    But don’t get distracted, lets get back on topic
    Once someone told me life is u make of it
    So I don’t let no one stop me, im a locomotive
    And no im not like them I dont mention money
    Cause saying Gucci, loui, prada makes me sound phony
    Im still sick buddy, and keep my head up like my nose runny
    That’s just how its gonna be, im here to stay, yeah I paid the fee
    Always me, jaytunes the em cee
    And theres more to me than the eye sees,
    and theres more meaning than the ear listens
    throw shots at me, shit, I can take the dissin
    cause ever since I started I was in it for the music
    shes my only lover, so her lips I be kissing
    cause girls nowadays just want my dick
    they jump up on my stick, ill give it to any chick
    no feelings involved, too many heart breaks made my heart cold
    But I don’t fear anything, cause being scared aint my thing
    Better times are calling yeah I heard the ring
    So im fucking ready for whatever that life brings
    (yeah yeah, whatever life brings)



    Feedback :

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post386553

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post386623
    Last edited by Jamerson; 02-05-2011, 10:16 PM.

  • #2
    Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

    Chill As Track Bro!

    Your Flow Fitted Perfect On The Beat, I Loved The Lyrics And + Considering You Didn't Write Them Down, Keep Up The Work And Looking Forward To More Of Your Music.

    5/5. Welcome Back Also

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    • #3
      Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

      Originally posted by WeezYIsCraaazY View Post
      Chill As Track Bro!

      Your Flow Fitted Perfect On The Beat, I Loved The Lyrics And + Considering You Didn't Write Them Down, Keep Up The Work And Looking Forward To More Of Your Music.

      5/5. Welcome Back Also
      thanks bro !
      and nawh i did write this lmao. I'm jus saying i havent done it in a while.

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      • #4
        Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

        flow was steady and fit da beat.
        lyrics was nice.
        just put more swag and emotion in, it seemed kind of dull.
        just needs that "umph" if u know what i mean, otherwise it gets kinda boring after awhile, especially a song like this with no hook.

        3.5/5, keep it up.
        EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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        • #5
          Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

          Dope track, perfect for your return.

          Flow: Your flow was definitely on point all of the way through. You seemed to have more of a soft/mellow tone, which was nice for this track. I didn't see any major errors.
          Lyrics:
          You stayed on topic, which was the most important. I think they were meaningful lyrics and sounded realistic. There weren't any bars in particular that made me say DAMN, but they weren't needed on this track.
          Other Notes: I like mellow songs like this, keep it up. Only thing I can question is the quality. Maybe a better mic is needed or better mastering should be done. It's not bad though, just could be improved.
          Overall/Rating:
          4.5/5

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          • #6
            Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

            Originally posted by Artille View Post
            Dope track, perfect for your return.

            Flow: Your flow was definitely on point all of the way through. You seemed to have more of a soft/mellow tone, which was nice for this track. I didn't see any major errors.
            Lyrics:
            You stayed on topic, which was the most important. I think they were meaningful lyrics and sounded realistic. There weren't any bars in particular that made me say DAMN, but they weren't needed on this track.
            Other Notes: I like mellow songs like this, keep it up. Only thing I can question is the quality. Maybe a better mic is needed or better mastering should be done. It's not bad though, just could be improved.
            Overall/Rating:
            4.5/5
            thanks and shit ur right i aint listen to it on my speakers when i was mastering bc i had my headphones on the whole time...
            ill fix it in a lil.

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            • #7
              Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

              Flow: B-
              Lyrics: B+

              Overall: 4.25/5, Very "conscious" lyrics. Good beat selection. All around this song is pretty dope. Some people need to remember its not what you say, but how you say it. You're rhymes sometimes are very elementary, but the thoughts and ideas you string together with them are very vivid and real and that's your strong suit I think. Flow is pretty darn good too. Welcome back Jay.

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              • #8
                Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

                Damn! Ya been gone for a long time man.. And great track. Sounds fuckin' professional bro!

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                • #9
                  Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

                  It's been awhile man, welcome back. This is a nice song to come back with. Perfect flow, even after the time off you haven't lost that and the lyrics really got your point across. Mastering could be a litte better. LIke maybe some added vsts on your vocals to make them clearer. Other than than that the adlibs and echoed words were good. Good all around trck, just gotta make your vocals sound clearer.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

                    Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
                    It's been awhile man, welcome back. This is a nice song to come back with. Perfect flow, even after the time off you haven't lost that and the lyrics really got your point across. Mastering could be a litte better. LIke maybe some added vsts on your vocals to make them clearer. Other than than that the adlibs and echoed words were good. Good all around trck, just gotta make your vocals sound clearer.

                    thanks man appreciate u always gimme feedback, inbox me some links so i can shit some of ur recent shit.
                    and yeahhh i need to get back to my mastering bc i haven tdone it in a minute, i was thinking about getting a new mic too.


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                    THANKS to everyones feedback so far.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

                      such a great song man!

                      great concept, flow fitted the beat so much, and the lyrics were also great for the concept

                      5/5!!
                      Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

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                      • #12
                        Re: Jay Tunes - Whatever Life Brings

                        Awesome song man. The only thing i noticed that could make it better is the emotion like deasel said. Just try to sound more cocky/confident. The lyrics and mastering and flow was great so keep it up and just try to sound more confident! looking forward to see if you improve

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