Artille & Noble - In the Sun

[Jamerson]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

nice songs ma dudes. chill as fuck

Noble - flow was alright you fell off in a few lines and at the end, but good shit and good lyrics bro
Artille - flow was chill and lyrics were dope. keep it up bro!
other - Yo noble you stay getting cool ass fuck beats and i think that helps you out a lot too... so keep that stash, i would ask where u get em but i wouldnt share my stash 90% of the time... and u prob wont either lol.

overall 4.5/5 good shit.. .and downloadable fo sho.

[Artille]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

nice songs ma dudes. chill as fuck

Noble - flow was alright you fell off in a few lines and at the end, but good shit and good lyrics bro
Artille - flow was chill and lyrics were dope. keep it up bro!
other - Yo noble you stay getting cool ass fuck beats and i think that helps you out a lot too... so keep that stash, i would ask where u get em but i wouldnt share my stash 90% of the time... and u prob wont either lol.

overall 4.5/5 good shit.. .and downloadable fo sho.

Is there any constructive criticism you can lend my friend. I always appreciate positive feedback, but I'm trying to get better and would like to know my flaws. =)

I appreciate all of the positive feedback from you all. Thank you. Brendon, looks like we actually made a decent song

[MC_Crary]

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This is a smooth track, nice going guys. You two sound good together too.

Flow: Both of your flows were good. The new mic definately shows a difference in Noble's flow, you almost sound like a different person.
Lyrics: The lyrics were good but I'd have to say I liked Noble's better, less multies than usual but when you try to have multies in every bar sometimes it can start to sound forced. Both of your lyrics stuck to the cooncept well. These were the least complex lyrics I think I've seen from Artille. It's understandable though I feel like when I do a song about weed I can get boxed in the way I write.
Other: No other things to say other than I would like to see more collaborations from you guys.

3.7/5

[Explicit]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

Noble - woah, your verse is good man, flow, deliver, lyrics and especially that new mic makes your voice stand out more and alot more clearer
Artille - your delivery was okay, you kinda sound bored to me.. your lyrics were okay, nothing bad, nothing spectacular either

overall, this is a pre good song, the beat is nice, dont really have any complaints about this song, 4/5

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

nice songs ma dudes. chill as fuck

Noble - flow was alright you fell off in a few lines and at the end, but good shit and good lyrics bro
Artille - flow was chill and lyrics were dope. keep it up bro!
other - Yo noble you stay getting cool ass fuck beats and i think that helps you out a lot too... so keep that stash, i would ask where u get em but i wouldnt share my stash 90% of the time... and u prob wont either lol.

overall 4.5/5 good shit.. .and downloadable fo sho.

Appreciate that. Yeah I think my flow could've been a bit better, but I don't think it fell off really.

And the beat. Its actually from a French Montana Ft Curren$y. The song was kinda lowkey though so thats probably why you don't know of it lol.

This is a smooth track, nice going guys. You two sound good together too.

Flow: Both of your flows were good. The new mic definately shows a difference in Noble's flow, you almost sound like a different person.
Lyrics: The lyrics were good but I'd have to say I liked Noble's better, less multies than usual but when you try to have multies in every bar sometimes it can start to sound forced. Both of your lyrics stuck to the cooncept well. These were the least complex lyrics I think I've seen from Artille. It's understandable though I feel like when I do a song about weed I can get boxed in the way I write.
Other: No other things to say other than I would like to see more collaborations from you guys.

3.7/5

Appreciate that bro, respect.

Noble - woah, your verse is good man, flow, deliver, lyrics and especially that new mic makes your voice stand out more and alot more clearer
Artille - your delivery was okay, you kinda sound bored to me.. your lyrics were okay, nothing bad, nothing spectacular either

overall, this is a pre good song, the beat is nice, dont really have any complaints about this song, 4/5

Thanks man!

[YoungTune.]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

Very chill song, beat was great, THP's flow was good throughout most of the song, lyrics were on point as always. & the quality was great.


Artille lyrics were very good, the flow was good too, it's different from every one else's flow on here tbh, only thing is you didn't sound "comfortable" at times.

other then that, great song guys.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

Very chill song, beat was great, THP's flow was good throughout most of the song, lyrics were on point as always. & the quality was great.


Artille lyrics were very good, the flow was good too, it's different from every one else's flow on here tbh, only thing is you didn't sound "comfortable" at times.

other then that, great song guys.

Thanks man!

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

Nice and chill collab-track.

I like it, but THP had the best verse imo (no hate ). Good n' chill "all-time-listen"-song with a very nice sample which fits the song great.

[THA GR8 M8]

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Nice and chill collab-track.

I like it, but THP had the best verse imo (no hate ). Good n' chill "all-time-listen"-song with a very nice sample which fits the song great.

Thanks man!!

[Artille]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

Very chill song, beat was great, THP's flow was good throughout most of the song, lyrics were on point as always. & the quality was great.


Artille lyrics were very good, the flow was good too, it's different from every one else's flow on here tbh, only thing is you didn't sound "comfortable" at times.

other then that, great song guys.

Thanks man, this was my first time recording over such a slow beat, so I had to get used to it. Also, it's my first weed song so this was much different for me. Thanks though man, I appreciate the honest feedback

[WeeZy iZ RaaaW]

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great song guys the tone was on point.

Artille i think a few of your lines were too repetitive, (like the "grape" puns) since u asked for constructive criticism.

4.5/5 good work

[Jamerson]

Re: Artille & Noble - In the Sun

you're right.


Noble -

Lyrics:
On point, just didnt like the summer/winter line, it was too basic and didnt even rhyme IMO.

Flow:
u were doing real good the first bars til the summer/winter line, then it was aightt and the ending wasnt the best either. But the begining the flow was deff on point. couldve kept it all the way through.

Other: Deff the type shit that you should rap too bc u know wat ur talking about haha.



Artille -

Lyrics:
deff on point and dope. Ur word play is really good bro, there's nothing i dont like about your lyrics.

Flow:
Chill and on beat, the soft pace is not bad for you dude, but i also wanna hear you on some fast-rap type shit soon though.

Other: The reason i didnt really give ya constructive criticism bc i didnt really find anything bad with ur part dude, you did good. The only thing that would be cool is seeing you put more shit together... is this the 2nd song u put up? bc i havent been here to check u out.



On another note, Noble, sorry if you disagree with my opinion that your flow was off at points, lol.