On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

[MC_Crary]

On My Level
by MC_Crary

It's the big bank totin', Purple dank tokin'
Fire flame representer, I leave the place smokin'
Got a grip on the game throat, yeah that ho chokin'
And life is a bitch, but on my dick she be strokin'
So I'm aimin' and pokin' her esophagus
Niggas can't stay off of this, g
h, i, j, k, l mc_crary
My B's will sting ya leave ya dead, my girl
Yeah it's in god's hands but nigga this is my world
You can't get on my level with five ladders and four stilts
But if you keep tryin, heads I splatter no guilt
When it comes to gettin girls I'm in a battle with Wilt
Respectfully decline when they try to get you to diss me
Cause your location is where my clip goes empty
Just stay in your basement, so you don't even tempt me
Let's not put another notch on nina, shawty already filthy

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Whatever Life Brings
In the Sun

[Explicit]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

personally i dont like the beat... and your flow seems a little off, the lyrics were average but its only a 16 not a proper song so yeah ill be sure to check out No Surrender, No Retreat when it comes out tho

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

Flow - Was good. But it seemed to switch up too much. Like there was no consistency if you get what I mean.
Lyrics - Pretty good. The 'G..... H, I, J, K, L, Mc_Crary" line was ill, just wish it flowed better.
Other - I see your quality is improving. Keep grindin' homie!
Overall - 3.5/5.

[MC_Crary]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

Thanks for the feedback guys, can I get some more?

[Pestrator]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

not bad bro, lyrics were decent u had some nice lines and ur flow was a lil off but ur improving bro keep it up 3.5/5

[mykill]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

Copycat.

LOL.

Flow: B
Lyrics: A-

Overall: 3.5/5, Sounds like you've been working more with mastering, getting your levels right with ad-libs and such. Good deal. Good level of energy and the writing for this was on par. Flow is the same as always, which is your own unique syrupy concotion that grabs the listener and ropes em in. Sometimes I think I'm your hardest critic, cause I listen to this and wonder why you didnt do something out of the ordinary. You're have that x-factor with songs and come out the block with something I didnt even think of, so I'm surprised there's nothing out of the ordinary with this. Other than that, great freestyle. Keep em coming.

LMI/MMG 4 EVA

[Jamerson]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

flow - was ok, couldve been more steady, but not bad, this beat is kinda hard to get right...
lyrics - nice, and i agree the g h i j k l mc Crary line was dope haha.
overall - nice lil 16, quality is nice too keep it up MC. ---3.5/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

Copycat.

LOL.

Flow: B
Lyrics: A-

Overall: 3.5/5, Sounds like you've been working more with mastering, getting your levels right with ad-libs and such. Good deal. Good level of energy and the writing for this was on par. Flow is the same as always, which is your own unique syrupy concotion that grabs the listener and ropes em in. Sometimes I think I'm your hardest critic, cause I listen to this and wonder why you didnt do something out of the ordinary. You're have that x-factor with songs and come out the block with something I didnt even think of, so I'm surprised there's nothing out of the ordinary with this. Other than that, great freestyle. Keep em coming.

LMI/MMG 4 EVA

You give me some of the best feedback though, and the most help so keep up the critiquing. I actually hadn't heard the song when I listened to yours but when I heard it I kne I had to do it. I'm gonna be dropping a few freestyles here and there. Street single from No Surrender No Retreat soon. Nowhere near done, but I wanna get the feel for this one out there. Also all the feedback is gonna help me to make this my best tape ever. Thanks for listening everybody.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: On My Level (16 Bars)-MC_Crary

Flow: nice, I never complained about ur flow, super diff
Lyrics: good I LOLD at some lyrics, you killed it
Other: the beat was good, and the 16 was good.
Overall: 3.5/5 do ya thang bro