The Show Goes On FULL

[dminor12]

Worked on this all night. Think i stepped up a lil bit on this one. This is to Lupe Fiasco's The Show Goes On. Here are the links to the video and the instrumental with the hook if you've never heard. Rate and critique please!

YouTube - Lupe Fiasco - The Show Goes On [Official Music Video]
YouTube - The Show Goes On (Instrumental W/Hook) HQ Download

The Show Goes On


To The Show Goes On (Lupe Fiasco)

[Hook]
(Verse 1)

Have you ever had the feeling that they call greatness?
Aint it the best you ever had? Screams from the haters
They don’t wanna see a nigga make it or have some success
They waiting on you to slip up or fall off a little bit
Just so they can laugh, but my eyes on the prize
Head to the skies, I bounce back once again
Mississippi bred nigga, I see my life crystal
They say the goin gone get tough but I’ma go getter
Fam and friends gone eat with me, buffet style so be greedy
Standing tall and talented, enjoying this thrill that I get
This yall year? Who said this?
Cuz even yo best can’t mess with this cause I’m flirting with doing some classic s***…b****

[Hook]

(Verse 2)

Ones in the air for yourself
Peace in the air for the nay-sayers
Treys in the air the people that’s grinding
Fours in the air for the niggas that’s shining
Fives in the air for all my fans
Cuz without you I wouldn’t be here
I woulda gave ten but I’m only doing one hand so please just bear with me
Look up the lights staring back down
Ears ringing form the roar of the crowd
Dreamed about this for so long
Scared of the planes think 9/11
RIP to fallen ones we’ll never forget ya
For all the dreams and aspirations I’m rapping now for
Ball players, doctors, nurses, even a lawyer
Technicians, pediatricians, fashion designers
So hip hop is all negative, they missed me apparently
Blame mom for my ways she did some good parenting

[Hook]

(Verse 3)

So no matter what life throws at you, just know you can get through
Regardless of what’s going on in the streets surrounding you
Bare dirt or full lawn, glass windows or barred ones
Never show they got to you, or else they’ve already won
Feed off the energy, let em know you number one
That you hanging on by a thread, that you gone make it through
I’ll be there to patch you up, which color black or blue
Even they shut us down, we’ll still be turned up fools

[Hook]

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: The Show Goes On FULL

not feelin it at all, words didnt flow.. 1/10

he messed up the flow, but the show must go on,
if u dont like me, then i say fuck you in this song,
i say the show goes on, ya the show still goes on,
i say the show goes on, ya the show still goes on,

stop for a sec, think about the time of the sweat,
better place your bets, and pay your debts,
you aint never ment, a nigga like me, i was sent,
from the above, beautiful as some doves,
we can switch it into some blood,
if u niggas decide to run,
i dont talk i let the gun,
i say i dont talk i let the gun,
have its fun, us bees we sting, we stung,
eat yall fakes for lunch, and i spit every day of the month,
iv had enough, my money is up,
i guess its good luck, yall niggas yall duck,
and i still dont give a fuck, i come on any beat and am like whats up,

[dminor12]

Re: The Show Goes On FULL

not feelin it at all, words didnt flow.. 1/10

he messed up the flow, but the show must go on,
if u dont like me, then i say fuck you in this song,
i say the show goes on, ya the show still goes on,
i say the show goes on, ya the show still goes on,

stop for a sec, think about the time of the sweat,
better place your bets, and pay your debts,
you aint never ment, a nigga like me, i was sent,
from the above, beautiful as some doves,
we can switch it into some blood,
if u niggas decide to run,
i dont talk i let the gun,
i say i dont talk i let the gun,
have its fun, us bees we sting, we stung,
eat yall fakes for lunch, and i spit every day of the month,
iv had enough, my money is up,
i guess its good luck, yall niggas yall duck,
and i still dont give a fuck, i come on any beat and am like whats up,

Sorry you aint feel this one. Think it woulda been better to hear than just read. Thanks for the input tho