In The Sun- Sight and Orp

[YM_Flash]

Second song we ever did. Its about people copying what you do

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pR4hAtNI1rg



Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post393486
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...the-sun-3.html

[indiglo09]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

Read the forum rules man, this will be taken down
U gotta give feedback to 2 songs before posting nd then have the links on your post

[YM_Flash]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

how do i delete it?

[indiglo09]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

how do i delete it?

U dnt have 2. just leave feedback on 2 songs, then edit your original post

[YM_Flash]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

how does the feedback have to look?

[indiglo09]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

how does the feedback have to look?

What u think of the song nd the lyrics, flow, etc. out of 5 once u do that just copy the links 2 your original post

[YM_Flash]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

now have feedback posted. Check out the song, very dope

[Artille]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

Flow: Meh, it was kinda off at some points on Sight's verse. Didn't really ride the beat very well either as far as your emotion goes. Orp was just about the same.

Lyrics: The lyrics were average to me. I didn't hear any lines that blew me away, but I did hear a few that made me wonder how long you took to write your verse. This is more of a chill beat, so I don't really like the direction you went on it. Take more time on your lyrics and don't waste a bar.

Other: You both did about the same lyrics and flow wise to me.
Rating: 2/5 (I still like the beat)

P.S. I'm not trying to hate, just didn't like the song at all with the two of you on it.

[YM_Flash]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

Yea i understand thanks for the feedback though. First collabo song we made, i always tell him to put emotion into it but it just never works for him. And i recorded my verse all night and couldnt get it right, so then i woke up congested and recorded and was tired of recording it so many times i just stuck with it. I wouldnt changed my flow but i was just done.

But my favorite line is the last 2 of the song. and also i have a song recorded for Maybe by tyga that ill post up later. and my next song is All of the lights by kanye.

anyways like i said thanks for the feedback

[Explicit]

Re: In The Sun- Sight and Orp

The delivery of both of your verses sound like you both are bored, maybe try and up it up a bit, and maybe through some layering in there so that your vocals stand out and are more stronger!

The lyrics from both of your are average, not bad but not that good either..

Personally i didnt like this track, but i will still check out tracks that you drop homie

-Lyrics 3/5
-Flow 4.5/5
Overall: 3.5/5