Explicit - 20 Bars

[Explicit]

I was bored and i heard this beat and i just wrote a quick 20

I know that i kinda dont pronounce two words write but i was to lazy to go back and fix it sinse im heavily into recording my EP/Mixtape

Anyway, drop by and give it a listen, also any feedback will be appreciated

Download:
LimeLinx - Preview - 20 Bars.mp3

Lyrics:

I just wanna travel all day, i dont wanna go home/
Be on the gravel convay, well known from america, rome/
Hitting clubs, and people knowing my songs/
Raw spitting brewing storming weather bitches wearing thongs/
The rock-rock star life, road mentality mind/
The stock-cock wife, sittin' at home she crying/
Poppin' bottles, swapping cuddles of all sorts/
Watching sports, then dealing with the fucking court's/
I have the blueprint to illmatic/ **SHHHHHH**
Its like the ignighter of the spark that cause's static/
And you motherfuckers are jealous cause you dont fucking have it/
Were at the tip of the song you can call it the climatic/
Ive got the adrenaline rush, the rush of adrenaline/
To much lust can turn to mush, mind swaying pendalum/
A day in the life, is a day in what you see/
Stored like cache blown away when im lighting up that tree/
When people see me, they look the other way/
I bet if i blow up, that story would be different aye/
And when i say im hot, i actually mean it yo/
I perform at the concert, not the after show/

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[mrr3ye5]

Re: Explicit - 20 Bars

Flow: Good : 4/5
Lyrics: Good : 4/5
Overall: Pretty Damn SICKK!! ahaha good job bro

[Jamerson]

Re: Explicit - 20 Bars

pretty hot.

lyrics were hot... at first i thought u were saying u do all that so i was like WTF/smh lol but then i got what u were saying and it was dope. Flow was on point, 95% ... i think if you woulda taken the time to spit errythin rite and master well (not that this is not good mastering) this wouldda been even hotter, but for a quick ass song this is pretty dope meng. keep it up...

[marcusgettin]

Re: Explicit - 20 Bars

I was bored and i heard this beat and i just wrote a quick 20

I know that i kinda dont pronounce two words write but i was to lazy to go back and fix it sinse im heavily into recording my EP/Mixtape

Anyway, drop by and give it a listen, also any feedback will be appreciated

Download:
LimeLinx - Preview - 20 Bars.mp3

Lyrics:



Links Of Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post396133
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post396135

Dope... keep doin it, you style is different because you don't try to sound like any mainstream hip hop artist!

[WKinhere]

Re: Explicit - 20 Bars

that beat is so epic

but

your lyrics are just as good, nice job, 4/5

[Explicit]

Re: Explicit - 20 Bars

Thank you all for your feedback, i appreciate it

[Explicit]

Re: Explicit - 20 Bars

.... bump, comon yall, i feed your tracks and shit, return the favor.

[broc717]

Re: Explicit - 20 Bars

good track man, the lyrics were definitely on point and the beat selection was def. on point too

keep grindin my man, if you get time check out my track surround sound too, appreciate it man