Sentus- Bow To The Beat

[Sentus]

Produced by Life & Death Productions

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My herculean reign is the pure essence of power
A king in the game leave the peasants devoured
Then your fame reaches from seconds to hours
And soon everything underneath the heavens is ours
In the presence of cowards hand out a lethal blow
So that when you grab the mic all the people know
That in rap there is only one king in one land
And you'll make sure that none sing and none stand
I'm done playin; I'm ready to take command
I'm sick of all the clowns in rap, I'll make a stand
I'd do anything; I'll even shake the hand
Of the devil if it means that I can save this land
I'll wake as planned to come and reduce ya plays
When I'm on the beat to rock you like medusa's gaze
You never knew a Mays who had passion for rap
The fame may be annoying but I'm asking for that

(Chorus)
Fuck praying to the gods I only bow to the beat
Cause it's the music that makes the sound so discreet
When you get in the zone and you pounce then you eat
So beware if you ever fuck around with the beast

My auras all mighty so you're struck at a glance
But when I'm inside the beat it's like I'm stuck in a trance
I play my own hand and leave nothin to chance
So I need to fight back if I will fuckin advance
Enough of the dance, I'm making the perfect piece
But all this disregard is wakin the lurking beast,
The future of rap is in a state of emergency
It needs a savior and it is blatant with urgency
I take hate undeservedly but I try to forget it
I'll silence the critics once the violence has hit us
In this battle of life to triumph again its
Essential that everyone bring out the lions within us
My music's for the kids who's been soaked in tears
For the terror of the flow that's been provokin fears
"Well fuck this white boy, I miss the golden years"
Well fuck your golden years, King Midas has spoken here

(Chorus)

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[Tha Professor]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

i'm feelin this dawg! flow and lyrics are tight.
The only thing which i ain't feelin is tha beat..

[Coleon]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

Sentus spits hot fire.

[mykill]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

Flow: C+
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4.25/5, Lots of technical things that holds this back. I think that the vocal mastering is a little off, but that's my ear and I could be wrong. I'm not any kind of engineer lol. The chorus needs more...something. It needs something more to make it stand out. At first listen, this right here moves lyrically, something you are not shy to pound into peoples heads. I think that's your greatest strong suit, is your lyrics are always crafted well. But entertainment wise, a Hip-Hop Head can listen to this, nod his head, and really get into it. Commercially, meaning your average rap listen or John Q. Public that buys music everyday, is gonna be bored of it. I think that's what you're objective is, to make good hip hop music. You got it here, but from a technical standpoint it needs to some bells and whistles to make it perfect. Other notes are that flow needs work, but who's doesnt around here with the exception of like....Broc...and Lil' Blanko....and prolly Sharoyce, but that's it. It's not horrible like some peoples, but you can tell its a work in progress and I dont mind that at all. Keep doing what you're doing. Keep it movin'. Kudos man.

You and Co' plan on dropping any tapes soon?

EDIT: Forgot to update the Overall score. Fixed.

[JAYRMe]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

Holy shit you remind Solomon the battle rapper.

Flow- 3.5/5
Lyrics- 3.5/5
Beat- 3.5/5

thats who im talking about.

[rookies]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

good shit man. some good rhymes
flow 8.5/10
lyrics 8.5/10
beat fits u well

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

Thanks for all the feed.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

I love how all you guys do is bitch about my subject matter and me not doing full songs but when I do you don't even listen lolz

[broc717]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

good ish on the lyrics again man, i like the wordplay for sure, keep on ya grind my man

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Bow To The Beat

Thanks broccary