JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

[JAYRMe]

JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

Feedback please.




http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...verse-rap.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-the-beat.html

[Jamerson]

Re: JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

either ur vocals are too low/beat too loud or ur mic is just low ... bc its difficult to hear ur voice is like a background sound in the beat...
but from what i can hear, flow doesnt sound bad.. lyrics are not bad either.. like that line about the train track..

[JAYRMe]

Re: JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

either ur vocals are too low/beat too loud or ur mic is just low ... bc its difficult to hear ur voice is like a background sound in the beat...
but from what i can hear, flow doesnt sound bad.. lyrics are not bad either.. like that line about the train track..

yeah beats a little loud, this is pre mastering so still gotta tweak it a lil.
Thanks for the feedback though appreciate it.

[Jamerson]

Re: JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

yeahh turn up vocals up a bit and also a little more "hmph" like more energy, on the flow, like.. i have the same problem and I myself cant tell when I rap like that but i try to work at it keep it up tho..

and YO! that iron salomon is a fcknnnnnnnnnnnn beast omfg, thank you for posting up that vid.

[JAYRMe]

Re: JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

My other songs I got good energy it's just the beat wasn't the best and the producer really wanted me to get on it and I aint wanna offend him you know.
Wrote those verses for another beat and woooooooh it was fire lol
and yeah dude a beast at battlin'!!

[rookies]

Re: JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

agree with everyone
flow: 6.5/10
lyrics: 6.5/10
good beat
mixing needs improved

[JAYRMe]

Re: JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

here is a preview of the abstract video for the song.

[MC_Crary]

Re: JAYRMe- I'm Feelin'

Mastering is a problem, but seems like youve addressed that a few times. This couldve been a good track with more energy or basically swag as most people would call it these days. Youre rapping about being the shit, so rap like you feel like youre the shit. Get me? Flow was good, but would sound better with better tracking in the final mix. Lyrics were ok, no wows though.

3.5/5