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  • Freestyle..

    I didn't start doing good till the end, i think.
    This one was horrible..

    I been doing this rap shit for about 3 weeks,
    I hope when i start recordin the shit don't get leaked.
    I'm at the top of the peak,
    Shootin at youh little birds at the end of yo beaks.
    I shoot yo ass up what that M-16,
    So when youh look in the mirror youh ckan see your damn spleen.
    That weed and that lean, Make me feel like I am Six-ty. (60)
    My bitch is my life,
    But If ya fuck wit my bitch, youh will lose yo life.
    This rap aint good,
    Nah, and i dont live in the hood. Ckuz my mommy and daddy, do everything they could.
    I would die for them, yes i would.
    Ok lemme spit will fire!
    I walked into ya bitch pussy, She said youh wann get hired?
    I said yeah, and the bitch made me tired.
    So i rolled another blunt, and set the bitch on fire.
    Ya fuck wit kiddale, Or I'll leave ya ass as the bed in tha jail cell.
    We niggas show, Not tell.
    Yeah, She treat my dick like a water hose,
    I got so much ice, Bitch Africa froze.
    Come on ya'll juss lemme do me.
    But when i did ya bitch, I made her scream like a scary movie.
    My gun is dark, i see through youh lil niggas like Patriarch.
    I made ya cat, bark.
    I'm got more green then Central Park.
    I stay wit more animals, then Noah's ark.


    Damnnn this SUCKED!
    Worst i have done on this site..

    Smoke good, eat good.
    Only fuck a bitch if her throat good, feet good.
    Just bought a fleetwood, and imma put some D's on that bitch.
    Looking like i gotta diamond disease on my wrist.

  • #2
    Re: Freestyle..

    u might wanna start reading ur verse to make sure it makes sense, not jus rhymes cuzz if someone were to get shot wit a M-16 i doubt they would be able to go look in the mirror then say "OMG I CAN SEE MY SPLEEN"..lol but the verse was good
    Baby I'm the shit, you aint even gotta do me, cuzz aint no one gon do me better than Ima do me! So Ima do me, My watch say time to do me, u dont kick it like i kicks it bitch i kick it i'm kinda Bruce Lee!

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    • #3
      Re: Freestyle..

      Originally posted by ispit
      u might wanna start reading ur verse to make sure it makes sense, not jus rhymes cuzz if someone were to get shot wit a M-16 i doubt they would be able to go look in the mirror then say "OMG I CAN SEE MY SPLEEN"..lol but the verse was good
      Lol, that means..
      I shot them in the back..
      And there spleen went to the front of their body..

      Smoke good, eat good.
      Only fuck a bitch if her throat good, feet good.
      Just bought a fleetwood, and imma put some D's on that bitch.
      Looking like i gotta diamond disease on my wrist.

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      • #4
        Re: Freestyle..

        Originally posted by koolkiddale13
        Originally posted by ispit
        u might wanna start reading ur verse to make sure it makes sense, not jus rhymes cuzz if someone were to get shot wit a M-16 i doubt they would be able to go look in the mirror then say "OMG I CAN SEE MY SPLEEN"..lol but the verse was good
        Lol, that means..
        I shot them in the back..
        And there spleen went to the front of their body..
        i mean i understood it, i'm jus sayin
        Baby I'm the shit, you aint even gotta do me, cuzz aint no one gon do me better than Ima do me! So Ima do me, My watch say time to do me, u dont kick it like i kicks it bitch i kick it i'm kinda Bruce Lee!

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