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  • #1

    Random Bullshit(Rate 1-10 please)

    Never Spit Lame Shit That Is So Ridiculous/
    I'm All About Money Never Been Ambiguous/
    I Keep It Real While Spiting Sick Shit Syphilis/
    I Keep These Bars Lock Inside Me Like My Mind Is Prison/
    I Don't Fuck With Cats That Say They Keep 100 I See No Real In Them X-Ray Vision/
    I Got Your Girl Doing Lines Like She Got Autism/
    She Got A Body Worth A Thousand Words Pure Art/
    And All She Wants To Do is Ride Rosa Parks/
    They Say Love Is Blinding But I can Still See Threw The Dark/
    And I Don't Know How I Can Live With A Broken Heart/
    The Pain Inside Me Will Never Fadeaway Stretch Marks/
    She said She's Gots To Go/
    I told her It's Your Choice Now She's A Free Soul/
    But She Don't Give It Up Free Tho/
    I'm The Only One Who Get Her Loving From Dusk Till Dawn Quentin Tarantino/
    Stay Icy Like I Just Walked Out Of A Ski Shop/
    Smoking Some Good Weed Bitch I Been Classic Like Fresh Pair Of Reeboks/
    Only In School I Was Failure/
    Smoking blunts And Putting My Semen On Your Girl Like Sailor/
    Im On My All Star Shit Chuck Taylor/
    And One More Thing Fuck You Bitches That Hated/
    Y'all Faker Than Gold Chains That Are Pated/
    Y'all so outdated/
    And Me Im So Fucking Outrageous/
    And Im Not Gonna Stop Till I'm The Motherfucking Greatest/
    Last edited by DurtyLyfe; 03-13-2011, 05:23 AM. Reason: messed up title
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  • #2
    Re: Random Bullshit(Rate 1-10 please)

    not well. 1/100 try again
    Talk Stupid Get Ya Head Popped
    I got that Esther bitch I'm red fox
    Big B's Red Sox I get money to kill time dead clocks
    You fuckin with a nigga who don't give a fuck
    Empty the clip then roll the window up
    Pussy Niggas sweet You niggas cinnabuns
    I'm in a red bitch she say she finna cum
    Two hundred thou on a chain I don't need a piece
    That Banana Clip let Chiquita Speak
    Dark shades EazyE
    Five letter YMCMB
    Bitch Ass Nigga Pussy Ass Nigga
    I see you lookin with your lookin ass nigga


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    • #3
      Re: Random Bullshit(Rate 1-10 please)

      Originally posted by DurtyLyfe View Post
      Never Spit Lame Shit That Is So Ridiculous/
      I'm All About Money Never Been Ambiguous/
      I Keep It Real While Spiting Sick Shit Syphilis/
      I Keep These Bars Lock Inside Me Like My Mind Is Prison/
      I Don't Fuck With Cats That Say They Keep 100 I See No Real In Them X-Ray Vision/
      I Got Your Girl Doing Lines Like She Got Autism/
      She Got A Body Worth A Thousand Words Pure Art/
      And All She Wants To Do is Ride Rosa Parks/
      They Say Love Is Blinding But I can Still See Threw The Dark/
      And I Don't Know How I Can Live With A Broken Heart/
      The Pain Inside Me Will Never Fadeaway Stretch Marks/
      She said She's Gots To Go/
      I told her It's Your Choice Now She's A Free Soul/
      But She Don't Give It Up Free Tho/
      I'm The Only One Who Get Her Loving From Dusk Till Dawn Quentin Tarantino/
      Stay Icy Like I Just Walked Out Of A Ski Shop/
      Smoking Some Good Weed Bitch I Been Classic Like Fresh Pair Of Reeboks/
      Only In School I Was Failure/
      Smoking blunts And Putting My Semen On Your Girl Like Sailor/
      Im On My All Star Shit Chuck Taylor/
      And One More Thing Fuck You Bitches That Hated/
      Y'all Faker Than Gold Chains That Are Pated/
      Y'all so outdated/
      And Me Im So Fucking Outrageous/
      And Im Not Gonna Stop Till I'm The Motherfucking Greatest/
      ---------- Post added at 09:40 AM ---------- Previous post was at 09:38 AM ----------

      i like that shit man,thats u?let me know whassup .im gonna say a 9 or 10
      Last edited by MISSISSIPPI MANIAC; 03-14-2011, 10:41 AM. Reason: forgot to rate

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      • #4
        Re: Random Bullshit(Rate 1-10 please)

        Flow is inconsistent, but the lyrics seem promising. Just try to stay consistent at least within one stanza, I noticed that you changed your flow up a lot, going fast and slow at odd times. If you're gonna go fast and slow, try to make it like a pattern at least within one stanza. Not every stanza has to be the same, but it still has to be relatively close to the way you flow on your other stanzas and or lines.

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        • #5
          Re: Random Bullshit(Rate 1-10 please)

          yo ithink it sounds good but ya like the guy before maybe a lil inconsitent but 6 or 7

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