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  • Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

    Feedback:
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-d-single.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html

    Aight, i know ive been gone for a minute, but im back, im just going to post a track every now and then and see what i need to improve in before i do a mixtape or anything like that, also im going to be more active in Tha Studio here

    This is a new track featuring WesT. Im on some horrorcore type shit at the moment. The track is produced by M15HKA, a really dope producer And yeah, thats really i have to say about the track. Oh and i kinda sing on the hook, its eirther a love or hate thing. All i know is to me personally its better than Auto-Tune and all that shit. So check it out, and ill appreciate any feed

    Lyrics:
    Verse 1: (Me)
    Scary... images in my mind/
    Cutting hedges in the shape i designed/
    With miscarriages combined/
    No escapes no changes everything on time/
    From midges to judges, aint not time for me to unwind/
    Prime time, season of the killings/
    No reason, for the thrill blood drippings/
    Chasing victims uphill, grass clippings/
    Corpses hanging from their earlobes/
    Causes loud banging, flashing lights like strobes, oh/
    The body swings, the aurora stinging the nostrils/
    Fare from Pandora, the only details lots of fossils/
    Ill cut myself rite after ill cut you/
    Shut up you mutt, this is something you cant wont do/

    Hook:
    Im not normal, and im far away from it/
    Its paranormal, it takes awhile to commit/
    Just look into my eyes/
    And then you'll realize/
    Im not normal, no, im not normal/

    Verse 2: (WesT)
    What you gonna' do when I slit you fast and I hit your back with my fist closed, jack/
    Never gonna' stop for shit, don't quit until they're dead and they're wrists get slashed/
    It's time to unleash the beast beneath and eat the piece of their flesh with ease/
    Feast on their meat, oh it tastes so sweet, time to snuggle with the corpse layin' next to me/
    I'm where the darkness is, I'm makin' out with dead carcasses/
    I come off as normal but ooo boy, I'm way too far from it/
    I cut my wrist and stitch it up just so I can rip them out/
    Put on a dress and some make-up and then I hit myself/
    And when you're dead, I, color you up with red eyes/
    Strip you naked and myself and then it's off for bedtime/
    Never piss me off, I'll slit you, dawg, trust me, I don't wanna lose it/
    I may be friendly and kind but think twice 'cause the truth is/

    Hook:

    Last edited by Explicit; 03-20-2011, 12:38 AM.
    Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

  • #2
    Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

    Yooooooo!!! the beat is killer producer on his a game, the whole feel is grimey and erry the sound effects and screams top it off nicely
    first verse is sick, if anything the flow coulda been just a lil tighter at the begginging but it still works well, the hook is niceeeee allthough it kinda throws off the sound, id of gone for some like deep pitched voice behind the orginal vocal, 2nd verse is liek Dayummmm flow is tightttt and the lyrics are pretty tight overall, 4/5 keep dropping broo!!


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    • #3
      Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

      Thanks for dropping by and feeding man, atleast someone is kind enough to feed
      Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

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      • #4
        Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

        Originally posted by Explicit View Post
        Thanks for dropping by and feeding man, atleast someone is kind enough to feed
        ya sorry bro but when i tried to stream it i get "This file is not a format that can be previewed."
        n i didn't feel like downloading..



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        • #5
          Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

          Its a new link now, i re-upped it
          Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

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          • #6
            Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

            Hey, when can we expect a mixtape? I thought we was gettin' one in Jan. But I guess I better check out these singles 4 now.


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            • #7
              Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

              Explicit // Flow: A // Lyrics: B-
              West // Flow: A // Lyrics: A

              Overall: 4.25/5, Like the concept you guys came up with this song. Ex, your mic sounds kinda drowned. Dont know if that's the positioning in the room, the size of the room, or the effects used. Flows are both crazily on point. Hook lyrically is good, think it needs some work in delivery. Works with the song though. Although your lyrics are crafted well, they dont seem to mesh well. You guys got a good chemistry. Might wanna think about doing a tag team mixtape effort.

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              • #8
                Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

                Originally posted by Explicit View Post
                Feedback:
                http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-d-single.html
                http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html

                Aight, i know ive been gone for a minute, but im back, im just going to post a track every now and then and see what i need to improve in before i do a mixtape or anything like that, also im going to be more active in Tha Studio here

                This is a new track featuring WesT. Im on some horrorcore type shit at the moment. The track is produced by M15HKA, a really dope producer And yeah, thats really i have to say about the track. Oh and i kinda sing on the hook, its eirther a love or hate thing. All i know is to me personally its better than Auto-Tune and all that shit. So check it out, and ill appreciate any feed

                Lyrics:
                Verse 1: (Me)
                Scary... images in my mind/
                Cutting hedges in the shape i designed/
                With miscarriages combined/
                No escapes no changes everything on time/
                From midges to judges, aint not time for me to unwind/
                Prime time, season of the killings/
                No reason, for the thrill blood drippings/
                Chasing victims uphill, grass clippings/
                Corpses hanging from their earlobes/
                Causes loud banging, flashing lights like strobes, oh/
                The body swings, the aurora stinging the nostrils/
                Fare from Pandora, the only details lots of fossils/
                Ill cut myself rite after ill cut you/
                Shut up you mutt, this is something you cant wont do/

                Hook:
                Im not normal, and im far away from it/
                Its paranormal, it takes awhile to commit/
                Just look into my eyes/
                And then you'll realize/
                Im not normal, no, im not normal/

                Verse 2: (WesT)
                What you gonna' do when I slit you fast and I hit your back with my fist closed, jack/
                Never gonna' stop for shit, don't quit until they're dead and they're wrists get slashed/
                It's time to unleash the beast beneath and eat the piece of their flesh with ease/
                Feast on their meat, oh it tastes so sweet, time to snuggle with the corpse layin' next to me/
                I'm where the darkness is, I'm makin' out with dead carcasses/
                I come off as normal but ooo boy, I'm way too far from it/
                I cut my wrist and stitch it up just so I can rip them out/
                Put on a dress and some make-up and then I hit myself/
                And when you're dead, I, color you up with red eyes/
                Strip you naked and myself and then it's off for bedtime/
                Never piss me off, I'll slit you, dawg, trust me, I don't wanna lose it/
                I may be friendly and kind but think twice 'cause the truth is/

                Hook:

                this is vintage horrorcore at its best... the both of you did yall thing on this shit...followed by a WHO THE FUCK PRODUCED THIS! west is a talented mothafucka... tell em i said that

                feedback for the malnurished
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                • #9
                  Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

                  What up, guys! It's WesT. Thanks for the love on my verse. The homie Explicit definitely killed it, too!

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                  • #10
                    Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

                    This is a pretty good track, both of you came with good verses. Explicit, I liked you verse because of the imagery you brought with the lyrics. Your vocie was like a mini-scene from a movie. Was technically sound also with multis and metaphors etc. West came with a nice flow and some nice word play. The flow is what stood out the most from him. Both of you are prety good artist, and I hope to hear more from you soon.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

                      No doubt this is song is dope. Your flow is way better since last time i listened to you
                      Nice concept of a song, and the lyrics go with it nicely. I say 4/5 good job

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                      • #12
                        Re: Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

                        why u took the link off??
                        EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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