Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

[Gibbsy]

This is a song i wrote and recorded mixed and masterd in about an hour,
I enjoyed writing it and i hope yall enjoy it ,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1SRX7FKzy_k


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[Jamerson]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

Flow - nice. just change it up in the hook, it sounded exactly the same as the verses.

Lyrics - you should post up the lyrics in ur post, since ur quality is not the best.. thats wat i do. But from what i can hear they were good. just though were the sniffin glue lines were ehh... only bums do that, not ppl in college

other - yeah man that hook was the worse part of the song.... needs to stand out more, also sometimes ur voice gets a lil too high pitched like your crying, idk if its ur mic or just ur voice. On another note, good shit writing meaningful stuff!


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[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

thanks for the feed man, but yeah about the collage glue sniffin aha ive nown a few collage kids to get mashed out sniffing glue sicks and magic markers and crap trust dat, aha just kinda drawn from what ive seen personally but thanks for the feed, and yeah man my mic is wank it cost about £24 which isnt much but yano (BROKE AS FUCK) aha thanks for the feed once again man apprciate it!!

[Tha Professor]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

I thought the flow was pretty good, but like Jay Tunes, sometimes it gets a bit too high pitched at the hook.

lyrics pretty good

3.65/5

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

I dont think he got too high pitch for the hook.
it was the progression of the chord he was singin in, but it prolly just sounded weird cuz his accent.

i like this joint though.
theme and topic go well with this beat, and u delivered it well.
u pretty consistant with everything.

lyrics 5/5

flow 5/5

only thing i can complain about is quality.

get a 90 dollar mic from bestbuy. the samsons.

or they like 60 on ebay.

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why u took the video down??

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

I dint take the video down man youtube been playing up for me recenlty and my videos have been deleteing themselves an shit but ive got it back up now new link, thanks for the feed man appricate how you broke it down and scored it i like getting that type of feed, and i will get a new mic soon as i can put the money toghether for one my quality does need improving alot

[mykill]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

Flow: A
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 4.5/5, As far as story telling goes, this is pretty hot. Gibbsy, you always bring a unique energy to the tracks you do. The effects at the end sound too low. Can barely hear you. Maybe you faded it out too much. I like this track. Nice and mellow.

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

Thank you man!! ive just been making so many track recenlty, i just wish i had a better mic tbh aha alot of the loss in my tracks is down to my quality but i really appricate the feed man and thank you for breaking it down to!! Much apprciated

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Gibbsy- No Two Stories The Same

Wasnt really feeling the hook but the verses were cool. Your verses are always somewhat solid, no doubt. Beat was nice too!
Keep it up man, 3/5