LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

[mrr3ye5]

Check out my free verses, leave some love &/or hate.

LOOK AT ME NOW:
YouTube - Look At Me Now (Free Verse)
PUT YOUR HANDS WHERE MY EYES CAN SEE:
YouTube - Put Your Hands Where My Eyes Can See (Free Verse)
YOU BE KILLIN' THEM:
YouTube - You Be Killin' Em (Free Verse)

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[WeeZy iZ RaaaW]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

Nice job man you got good flow u sound kinda monotonous at times tho u shud switch it up,
Flow: 4/5 i liked your deliveries
Lyrics: 3.5/5 good but cliche at times
Overall: 4/5 good job man i wanna hear a full song tho

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

Nice job man you got good flow u sound kinda monotonous at times tho u shud switch it up,
Flow: 4/5 i liked your deliveries
Lyrics: 3.5/5 good but cliche at times
Overall: 4/5 good job man i wanna hear a full song tho

thanks for the feedback man... i knoww.. i barely started rapping, i'm still finding my voice... but yeah i got a mixtape.. peep that right here

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[Jamerson]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

Flow - was a killa bro in all the diff free verses..
lyrics - pretty nice, overall

Im really digging your flow, im tryna get into that speedy Gonzales flow lmao still tryna get better at it, but youre pretty good at it. now, if you're tryna find your voice, i think a lil deeper voice will do it, like your really putting energy, and it would improve the delivery that is already pretty good.


cant believe u didnt start too long ago
everybody be on the look out for this kid, #keepitup

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

Flow - was a killa bro in all the diff free verses..
lyrics - pretty nice, overall

Im really digging your flow, im tryna get into that speedy Gonzales flow lmao still tryna get better at it, but youre pretty good at it. now, if you're tryna find your voice, i think a lil deeper voice will do it, like your really putting energy, and it would improve the delivery that is already pretty good.


cant believe u didnt start too long ago
everybody be on the look out for this kid, #keepitup

Thanks man, i appreciate the feedback, yeah, i started rapping because i got good feedback from that T-Pain - Motivation contest... and ever since then, i was like , lemme try this rap thing out... fell in love with it man.. wish i started longgg time ago, but i guess every is for a reason.. thanks for the feedback man

[Jamerson]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

cool bro i send u a friend req. on youtube, we needa collab soon

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

Man, listening to Look At Me Now right now. You killin' it. Good job man. Quality is really nice. Flow is really nice. Lyrics are dope. Dope energy.

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

Man, listening to Look At Me Now right now. You killin' it. Good job man. Quality is really nice. Flow is really nice. Lyrics are dope. Dope energy.

thanks man, i appreciate the feedback, imma be releasing 2 Free Verses every week, so peep out for that.. but thank you for the feedback

[broc717]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

my favorite part is the originality of your flow, and you killed all three, im feelin it, keep on ya grind fam!


check my check if you can then too

[Gibbsy]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

the first one look at me now, verse is sick man!! your flow is niceee, the only thing i would say is you cud have a bit more bass in your voice maybe ad a few more adlibs just to make it sound full ? if that makes sense lyrics are nice on this too like the little hook too

2nd track dope i love that beat, any buster rhymes instrumental tends to be sick !! your flow is funny as fuck on this its spot on kinda makes me laff though which i guess you intended so great work with that i like to hear some humours stuff sometimes like the nate dogg mention too!!!

3rd is by far my favourite instrumental, i like your little intro too made me laugh again aha i love how your flow sounds like some chiddy bang type of shit , by far my favourite outta the 3 tracks this should be a whole track!!! speedin up in the verse shows skill to nice work homie

1st 3.5/5
2nd 4/5
3rd 5/5 !!!

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

my favorite part is the originality of your flow, and you killed all three, im feelin it, keep on ya grind fam!


check my check if you can then too

thanks man, i'll be sure to peep yo' music

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the first one look at me now, verse is sick man!! your flow is niceee, the only thing i would say is you cud have a bit more bass in your voice maybe ad a few more adlibs just to make it sound full ? if that makes sense lyrics are nice on this too like the little hook too

2nd track dope i love that beat, any buster rhymes instrumental tends to be sick !! your flow is funny as fuck on this its spot on kinda makes me laff though which i guess you intended so great work with that i like to hear some humours stuff sometimes like the nate dogg mention too!!!

3rd is by far my favourite instrumental, i like your little intro too made me laugh again aha i love how your flow sounds like some chiddy bang type of shit , by far my favourite outta the 3 tracks this should be a whole track!!! speedin up in the verse shows skill to nice work homie

1st 3.5/5
2nd 4/5
3rd 5/5 !!!

haha thanks for the feedback man,.. when i try to make my voice deep, for some reason it comes out high, ahhah idk, but i feel like i haven't found my voice or flow

- LaN

[indiglo09]

Re: LaNNy - (MY 3 Free Verses) Peep'em

All 3 songs were savage, especially due 2 the fact that u just started recently. U got a lot of potential. My fav was the last.
Lyrics: 3.5/5
Flow: 4.5/5 - seemed a little rushed a couple of times but the rest of the time was sick!!
Overall: 4/5 - really cool songs man, i'll be checkin back for more in the future