Broc - Demonstrate

[broc717]

Broc - Demonstrate
My Turn EP coming soon

lemme know what yall think, appreciate you checkin it out too, here goes my Artist Page as well
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[Jamerson]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

Flow - good like always, good delivery, breathin.. etc
Lyrics - outstanding, you know.
Other - bro, the only thing i did not like was the hook.... it didnt stand out, it blended in with the verses too much... i liked the hook lyrically but you didnt switch up the flow so it was blahh....

other than that great track, keep doin your thang !

[broc717]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

yeah I agree with you man, I didnt really know how I wanted to produce the vocals to help make them stand out like that, if you can hear I threw on a reverb to the first 4 bars but that definitely didnt do enough justice, I appreciate the feedback tho my dude, thanks for takin the time to listen

[broc717]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

dont usually do this, just curious what people think of this track, bump

[Gibbsy]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

gotta say this beat is immense just the sort of track ide get on, flow is on point, quality is on point!!,
the concept and lyrics are intense man!! your rhyme scheme is tight to!!! i like the whole track and ide agree with Jamerson the hook is the only thing that cuda made this track better We shud deffo collab!!

Overall 4.7/5 nice work bro!!

[MC_Crary]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

I actually like the hook. That was one of thge first things I was looking for because of the other comments about it. Maybe some kinda effect like a woosh or something leading into the hook, but that would be all that I would change about it. Your lyrics were on point. Its good to see the style of rapper's in Tha Studio diversifing, I like the concept of the song too. Your flow was perfect too, I'm not a fan of the chrous effect you do on some parts but to each his own. Great mastering too btw. Very good track bro.

[pgathriller]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

track is ill man, mix sounds on point and the delivery is great; hope we can get a track together man!

[broc717]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

thanks for the love! reall appreciate it yall

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

Yeah bro u already know u a solid artist.

flow 5/5

lyrics 5/5

your lyrics and chorus are always detailed and well put together. keep it up.
and let us know if u got any good news from the a & r that listned to your demo.

[indiglo09]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

Sick song man!! Really liked the beat and the power of your lyrics. You got real good flow and delivery aswell. Def goin be checkin your E.P.

[Pestrator]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

i love this song, love how u were able to just express how you feel about the subject. I liek the lyrics the flow was mad nice. The hook was also good, it kinda did sound the same as the verses liek the delivery of it but not enough to make it bad imo. I thought it was all solid from hook to verses. Kepp it up bro!

[Tha Professor]

Re: Broc - Demonstrate - AUDIO CHECK IT!

Your flow is pretty tight,
I see the effort in your lyrics, keep that up!
4/5