Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

[xXPyroXx]

This is THE NEW VERSION OF THE remix off Eminem's song Lose Yourself
YouTube - Pyro Ft. YouNeek-Lose Yourself

Feedback 1
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
Feedback 2
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...and-noble.html
(next time wait before u lock it, i always put up feedback)

[indiglo09]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

Siick!! Fuckin love the track man

[MC_Crary]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

This was a good track, You Neek's mastering kinda of brought it down. Pyro's verse's were good.Reverb seems a little high on the hook. Lyrics were good from both of you guys. I liked pyro's flow alot. You Neek is well what better way to describe it, unique. If you had a better mic your shit would be poppin bro. You did the original justice on this one. Just keep grinding.

[Gibbsy]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

The fact that im drawn to this track anyways may make me a little bias,i like how the intro is constructed exsaclty the same as eminems, i feel like its not as full as it could be though, the vocal seems to keep crossing over from right to left side on the first two verses which is strange seeing as it doesnt sound like you have any adlibs, i dont like the hook really its the same as em's lyrically and its not hit as well has him of course, not hating with this statement but taking on an eminem song is something you shouldnt do half heartedly because no1 is going to like any other version better than em's. 3rd verse quality is much better but flow thoughout isn't pin point, i like the track though tbh it has some good parts and some well written lyrics overall 3.5/5

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

The fact that im drawn to this track anyways may make me a little bias,i like how the intro is constructed exsaclty the same as eminems, i feel like its not as full as it could be though, the vocal seems to keep crossing over from right to left side on the first two verses which is strange seeing as it doesnt sound like you have any adlibs, i dont like the hook really its the same as em's lyrically and its not hit as well has him of course, not hating with this statement but taking on an eminem song is something you shouldnt do half heartedly because no1 is going to like any other version better than em's. 3rd verse quality is much better but flow thoughout isn't pin point, i like the track though tbh it has some good parts and some well written lyrics overall 3.5/5

Thanks man I know what u mean about the channels I'll change the settings I love that song too and I was so nervous to see if I did the beat justice, what du mean about it's not as full as it should be ?

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

Flow - The first two verses were definitely better in flow. The last verse had a few rushed lines it seemed like.
Lyrics - Nice message on the first two verses. Although the lyricism wasn't really there, you got your message across. The last verse was good too, had a hard time understanding some words though.
Other - Song was pretty good, but you didn't really make it your own. The intro was exactly the same, along with the hook.
Overall - Pretty decent song. 3.5/5.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

Thanks for the feedback it's really apreciated

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

Beat choice is different and great, the original is a classic, so can't go wrong there.

Lyrically it's hit and miss. Message wise and passion wise I dig it, it's solid and inspiring, I'm in a similar position. In some places it's a little basic rhyme scheme wise though, but it's a small complaint.

Flow goes between great and a bit off, it's always listenable though. Last verse didn't have the best quality but my own quality is hit and miss so I'd be a hypocrite to complain too much there.

Energy is good, definitely knew you were feeling what you were spitting, always a plus.

Hook is just the same as the original with added reverb, so not much to say, does the job adequately. Could have maybe done with a bit more "oomph" though.

Overall, a good solid track, something different but perhaps needed to change the formula of the original song up a little. Still for what it was I enjoyed it and look forward to your future contributions to the studio. 3/5 for me.

[WeeZy iZ RaaaW]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

the songs not finished, we were jus lookin for feedback for lyrics

[Young Corruption]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

i liked how you re-did the intro and the hook that was clever

Pyro
i liked your verse's better(sorry YouNeek) your quality was good and you did the song justices. your lyrics were good i liked them and i few line caught my attention that i really liked so thats a plus. i haven't really heard stuff from you with school and eveything but i liked what i heard and the flow was good. i little miss up here and there but thats expected not everyone can be perfect in every song. the hooks reverb did sound a little weird. turn in down a little and it would sound better in my eyes since i can't speak for everyone

YouNeek
though i like Pryos verse better i liked your flow on the song better. quality needs a little work but your lyrics did have its moments where they stood out to me. You did seem rushed at times so maybe when you write if you feel rushed when saying it to try and rewrite it or come up with a different way of saying what you want to say. that was my problem and it really helped me out.

But of ya'll did good and i wanna here the finished version

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

i liked how you re-did the intro and the hook that was clever

Pyro
i liked your verse's better(sorry YouNeek) your quality was good and you did the song justices. your lyrics were good i liked them and i few line caught my attention that i really liked so thats a plus. i haven't really heard stuff from you with school and eveything but i liked what i heard and the flow was good. i little miss up here and there but thats expected not everyone can be perfect in every song. the hooks reverb did sound a little weird. turn in down a little and it would sound better in my eyes since i can't speak for everyone

Thanks man ive changed the hook already like u said the reverb was a little intense, but i reallt appriciate the comment

[indiglo09]

Re: Lose Yourself - Pyro and Youneek

This shud def be gettin more feedback, ye both fuckin killed it!!!