Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

[Z!Greatest]

Hey yall, new track from myself, Never To Return, a mellow storytelling track. I'm on the hook and 2nd verse, my mate Sunny is on the 1st, and Dizzy on the 3rd.

Even though Dizzy is my mate, his verse is admittedly weak, so if anyone wants the file with just me and Sunny and want to drop a new 3rd verse that would be great, let me know.

Here's the track- YouTube - Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy- Never To Return

And here's my 2 feedbacks-
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...and-noble.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...d-youneek.html

[Jamerson]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

youre the "hook" right?

damn, you can autotune.. lol
drop a full song, just you... not doing a hook for someone feels me?
I thought your hook wasnt bad tho lol

[MC_Crary]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

Honestly you were the only one that was listenable. Its usually a total hit or a total miss with me and foreign rappers. Your verse was pretty good, yrically it was basic but followed the concept. Your hook was pretty good too, don't like the autotune that much but to each his own.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

holy shit dawg that was amazing you were a beast on the hook and in your verse. if you wouldn't mind i could give it a shot as a 3rd verse. i like doing story telling songs sense thats what i manly do

[Gibbsy]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

I loved the track personally, good work!!!

[indiglo09]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

Really like your hook and the beat. Your verse was cool too. Wasn't feelin the other 2 on the track so I'll just rate your contribution.
Lyrics: 3/5
Flow: 3.5/5
Hook: 4/5
Overall: 3.75/5
Nice track overall, keep it up!

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

Thanks for the feedback everyone, much appreciated and as I said imma start getting back to more people on Tha Studio, I can't right now in work though as I can't put the sound on to listen without disturbing anyone. Gonna bring headphones next week lol.

Anyway yeah I'm the hook and second verse, I've got plenty solo songs ready, I just like helping my mates "be on a song" lol, but I realise that's not how you advance in the industry, having dodgy features to do someone a favour. Then again...how does Gucci get featured on half decent rapper's albums?

Anyways cheers, and sure Young Corruption, if you want to try a 3rd verse for sure PM me, and I'll send you without Dizzy's verse

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

very nice hook that fits the mood of the beat i like this.
mellow smooth beat , relaxing.
lyrics on point wit the topic.
flow was steady throughout.

lyrics and flow 5/5

overall 4/5, cuz the features lol. u should go solo.

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

very nice hook that fits the mood of the beat i like this.
mellow smooth beat , relaxing.
lyrics on point wit the topic.
flow was steady throughout.

lyrics and flow 5/5

overall 4/5, cuz the features lol. u should go solo.

Thanks Diezel bro, the features on the new track I'm dropping tonight ain't much better, I'm gonna get solo versions of all these songs recorded.

Also, a remix of this song featuring Young Corruption & Lyric from Shadowville (assuming he's decent, ain't heard him yet) will be up within a week-ish, so keep it locked if your a fan of the hook and beat.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

Thanks Diezel bro, the features on the new track I'm dropping tonight ain't much better, I'm gonna get solo versions of all these songs recorded.

Also, a remix of this song featuring Young Corruption & Lyric from Shadowville (assuming he's decent, ain't heard him yet) will be up within a week-ish, so keep it locked if your a fan of the hook and beat.

i got you man tonight for sure if i don't pass out again. i'll actually probably do my verse when i get out of class or something to re-record

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

i got you man tonight for sure if i don't pass out again. i'll actually probably do my verse when i get out of class or something to re-record

Lol try get it done as soon as you can bro, the other guy just got his verse in 2 days ago

[Young Corruption]

Re: Z!Greatest feat. $unny & Dizzy - Never To Return (Need New 3rd Verse for Remix)

ah alright tonight for sure. i'll get fucked up after i record