Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

[indiglo09]

My second single from my upcoming debut mixtape "Awakening". Feedback really appreciated!! Enjoy

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[Gibbsy]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

Firstly i wana kick this feed off by saying nice choice of beat, "drop the world" sick instrumental,
i like how youve followed lil waynes flow on the first verse, quality isnt amazing but is pretty clean and tidy, allthough you dont seem to back up your vocals or ad adlibs :/ that always helps with the overall sound,
The hook is SICK!!! i love it could be and original song tbh,!!
You carried on the same flow on the 2nd verse, so it kinda started to get borning in all honesty you coulda' switched up to an eminem style verse for the 2nd but hey each to there own, overall ide give this 4/5 deffo room for improvement but overall not a bad track man keep it up!

[Kevi7V]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

Wow. Chorus is simply amazing, really powerful.
Verse one : pretty chill, good flow, I like it.
Verse two : kinda the same as verse one but I like it a lot.

I could listen to this all day

[MC_Crary]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

Liked your play on this song. Ncie flow. Sounds like you got a little autotune on the verse too right? That might help, but I haven't heard any of your other stuff. The hook was good too. The lyrics fit the purpose, but nothing that made me say wow. But that wasn't necessary for a song like this. It was more of a uplifting type song, which the lyrics went well with.

[indiglo09]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

Firstly i wana kick this feed off by saying nice choice of beat, "drop the world" sick instrumental,
i like how youve followed lil waynes flow on the first verse, quality isnt amazing but is pretty clean and tidy, allthough you dont seem to back up your vocals or ad adlibs :/ that always helps with the overall sound,
The hook is SICK!!! i love it could be and original song tbh,!!
You carried on the same flow on the 2nd verse, so it kinda started to get borning in all honesty you coulda' switched up to an eminem style verse for the 2nd but hey each to there own, overall ide give this 4/5 deffo room for improvement but overall not a bad track man keep it up!

Thanks for checkin it out man

Liked your play on this song. Ncie flow. Sounds like you got a little autotune on the verse too right? That might help, but I haven't heard any of your other stuff. The hook was good too. The lyrics fit the purpose, but nothing that made me say wow. But that wasn't necessary for a song like this. It was more of a uplifting type song, which the lyrics went well with.

Thanks for the feedback No there wasn't ne autotune on the verse - just eq nd compressor.

[indiglo09]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

Bump for feedback

[Young Corruption]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

listening to it for the second time in a row just cause i was distracted the first time. like others said i like how you keep the same flow but you should of switched it up in the second verse it would of made the song sound better but i like the hook, it was pretty amazing. the mixing could use i little more work but we all need that haha. i liked the lyrics but nothing really stood out to me but that doesn't take away from the great song you created. well done my friend

[indiglo09]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

listening to it for the second time in a row just cause i was distracted the first time. like others said i like how you keep the same flow but you should of switched it up in the second verse it would of made the song sound better but i like the hook, it was pretty amazing. the mixing could use i little more work but we all need that haha. i liked the lyrics but nothing really stood out to me but that doesn't take away from the great song you created. well done my friend

Thanks for taking the time to listen and for your in depth response, really appreciate it

[indiglo09]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

Ne1 else wanna let me know what they think bout it?

[CoMau]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

Subscribed to your youtube channel sickkkkk

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

This shit dope no doubt. Seems like you got good beat taste, thats whats up. The lyrics was aiighttt, you seem like youve been rapping for a while, I can vibe to it. Lyrics: 3/5 Flow: 3/5 overall 4. good job

[WeeZy iZ RaaaW]

Re: Instinct - You Gone, I'm On

great song, sick beat! the hook is amazing and i think if you just put more time into the verses nd switch your flow up this song could be a instant hit!
Lyrics: 3.8/5
Flow: 4/5
Hook: 5/5
Voice: 5/5
overall: 4.5/5
good work man true musician