Trippin Project - Cody Mauer

[CoMau]

Im Cody Mauer,
Please just take a minute to listen to my raps and tell me weather or not i am good or not good. Please ill take all posts.

Project Trippin by Cody Mauer on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
(newest song made today)

It takes me maybe 5-15mins to make a track. Maybe i need to work on some longer.

-Cody

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...one-im-on.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-love-flu.html

[pgathriller]

Re: Trippin Project - Cody Mauer

i'm diggin the style you're going for, some nice abstract almost spoken-word type stuff. it's bomb, but it does need some work. i know you're going for a mellow delivery but it needs more emotion, and not an aggressiveness, just more i just don't feel the sorrowness in the rhymes. the instrumental is dope for this style but you need to vibe with the eerie tone more give it a more emotional attachment. vocals sound a little dry too, maybe just some really light reverb, almost unnoticeable but it'll help; and throw in some doubling/adlibs to accentuate the tone. overall it's a dope bluleprint but it needs that extra punch cause right now it feels like a rough draft. keep at it