Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

[ATLien666]

Ehh, I've been bored and busy as fuck, so this is the first song I've done in a while.

YouTube - Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts rap remix.

Lyrics:

Verse 1:
Locket full of memories, does that shit even matter?/
The memories of the past only make us sadder/
You caught up in the fun of breakin' hears and killin' love/
I could express it all, but you know it fuckin' sucks/
Your high, my pain/
Your fun, my love; same thing/
We both players, same game/
I catch feelings quick; let emotions fly/
I mean, in your pussy is where my emotions die/
If we bein' honest, why don't be let the truth be known?/
You could freeze hell over with the ice inside your soul/
But you don't care, or you just don't know/
If you find something good, you ain't supposed to let it go/

Verse 2:
She say, "Oh, what about you?" She point fingers in judgment/
Same nigga that fucks girls, then just dumps it/
Shrug my shoulders, sayin', "Fuck it."/
Go ahead and blame me/
Tell me that you hate me/
See if that shit change me/
I'm just cut out for matin', not datin'/
I slide in and out relationships, get in relations with those girls my girl just got done datin' with/
I ain't gonna lie and say I'm hatin' it/
I mean, I love a good relationship/
She say I write all these love songs, am I just fakin' shit?/
She's like...

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[Z!Greatest]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

Imma keep it short since I'm just up and need a cup of tea, lyrics suit the subject, decent delivery with a bit of emotion, good beat choice with hot hook, problem for me is the flow, keeps everything off for me. Your not a bad rapper IMO, but you really gotta recognise when your rhymes ain't sitting on the beat. No hate homie, Z.

[mykill]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

Flow: C
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 3/5, I never can grasp why you keep doing songs like this, but if that's your cup of tea, its your cup of tea. I'm not putting any negativity to it, just dont understand the personal draw you have for it. You always have emotional lyrics, which is great for someone your age (I believe you're pretty young right) and shows how out-of-the-box you can be and stay unique and differentiated from your peers. As far as heart and soul, you put that in every track. Your flow however still seems like its off. Welcome to the club. I'm the president. Sounds like you're still rapping to a different beat than the one going. Keep working on that. Other than that, this was a decent remix. Good to see you back around.

[rebirth-of-autotune]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

good lyrics bro, deeppppppppp 4/5

[ATLien666]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

Flow: C
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 3/5, I never can grasp why you keep doing songs like this, but if that's your cup of tea, its your cup of tea. I'm not putting any negativity to it, just dont understand the personal draw you have for it. You always have emotional lyrics, which is great for someone your age (I believe you're pretty young right) and shows how out-of-the-box you can be and stay unique and differentiated from your peers. As far as heart and soul, you put that in every track. Your flow however still seems like its off. Welcome to the club. I'm the president. Sounds like you're still rapping to a different beat than the one going. Keep working on that. Other than that, this was a decent remix. Good to see you back around.

Yeah, Idk, I guess I relate to these songs more, and yeah, I just turned 16. Yeah, my flow seems to be my major drawback, but i'mma keep workin' on it, thanks for the feedback!

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

My nigg keepin it realll, its crazy cuz as i was listening it was like i can actually relate to some of the lyrics lol aint really had that happen, from noone in the studio. good shit bra. Flow: 4/5 Lyrics: 4/5 keep it up bra bra!

[indiglo09]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

Nice song man, real deep. I really liked the melody of the song. Thought your delivery could have been better nd switch up the flow a bit. Overall pretty cool

[ATLien666]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

Right on for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

son, this is hot.

your poetic style always compliment these remixes cuz the instrumentals and songs always real powerful. shit is crazy.

and u got me interested in hearing more of these artists, cuz i never heard of her, but i like this song now lol.

this is diverse and different than what most are doing, so these niggas on here not gonna understand, but there's a audience for this.
u just gotta find them.
keep doin these if u like, eff what niggas on here saying, this is art.
lyrics on point and poetic.
flow, is subjective as to as weather its perfect or not becuz this is a completely different type of song.

lemme ask u this.... do u think that your flow is off???

usually when u make a song, u do it till u yourself feel thats its good enough.

so in your own ears , are u hearing everying on beat, then when u get on here everyone saying its off??

maybe this is the way u intended on this song??

i say the flow is strange at first, , but it works for your type of songs like this, and u get use to it after a few listens.
u might be on to something wit these.
niggas on here just cant accept change.
but im a radical musician, and like to push the limits, and try new shit.
keep pushin.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Christina Perri ft. Yung Cash - Jar of Hearts.

Flow - You were off most of the time it seemed. Only a few lines seemed to flow on beat right.
Lyrics - Were good, nothing to great though.
Overall - 3/5..... Haven't really seen much improvement lately.