Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

This is dope...Production is great the rapping still needs some works.....Sometime your lines are too long or short for the bar and you over extend it and it sounds amateur...I like how you stress some of your words and emphasize your rhyme scheme....you remind me a little of travey mccoy/asher roth hybrid from gym class heroes....this is definitely something I can rock too. good job 7/10..oh yea....turn up your mic a bit..

Thanks man. But when I do lines like where.... I'll have short line, then a long line.. I do that on purpose. I like doing that flow. I usually do it when I'm trying to carry on multies, I get what you are saying though. And yeah, the vocal volume lol. I swear I've played the song on my computer about 20 times so far. The volumes are perfect to me. The intro is lower than the rest, but that's how I wanted it. And the hook and verses sound blended nice with the beat. But I'll start increasing the volume on my vocals up a little bit now before mixing down. Thanks again.

[shbasketball12]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

This is my favorite of yours. The beat is really good. The hook could be better but the verse definitely makes up for it. I like the lyrics a lot too. The way you said some shit caught me off guard. I thought you were gonna say it one way and then you came at it with a different flow. That was good. The quality was perfect too. Getting better with every song man. Keep it up.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

This is my favorite of yours. The beat is really good. The hook could be better but the verse definitely makes up for it. I like the lyrics a lot too. The way you said some shit caught me off guard. I thought you were gonna say it one way and then you came at it with a different flow. That was good. The quality was perfect too. Getting better with every song man. Keep it up.

The hook isn't too much, I agree. Its basically just saying "I spit the truth when I rap", but in a not so obvious way lol. And yessssssss. Thats what I always try to do with my flow energy, catch people off guard. Thats why I like flowing different than the normal person does. Thanks for checking it out man!

[MFDOOM]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

there must be something with the organs on hip hop beats today...yeah dude this is really hot and the power u put into the song is really well done....i enjoyed it

[JAYRMe]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

I like it but gotta work on mastering that way it sound the same on all speakers.

Also add more layers to your vocals after a while gets too repetitive.

My 2 cents hope you use it.

[indiglo09]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

Nice song man. I prefered this over songs i've heard from u in the past so you're definitively improvin Thought the vocals could be louder like some1 else said.
Lyrics: Pretty good nd fit with the beat, thought some of it could have been more original - 3.5/5
Flow: was nice nd chill, suited the beat - 4/5
Hook: I thougt it could have been a bit better - was kind of monotonous nd a bit boring - 2.8/5
Beat: Loved it - 4.5/5
Overall: Cool song - really enjoyed it nd look forward 2 hearing more from u in the future - 3.7/5
Check out mine if u get a chance, thanks http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...one-im-on.html

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

Thanks for feedback everyone. I'll definitely use it to my advantage.

Indiglo - On my phone atm. Will return feedback tomorrow or whenever I have time to get on the computer.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

I'm feelin the beat bro. The organ sound is good for your voice. You remind me of Fabolous a bit, not sound wise just his laid back delivery. Your flow was perfect. I didn't like the hook very much, I think you could've come up with something better. I think it would have been better if it hadve been a longer song too, you may have mention something about that in the thread already but I didn't go back and check. Either the verse is still great, as far as mechanics you had the multies and metaphors down. Your verse also head a message, which is rare in Tha Studio. Good track man, I wanna hear another mixtape for you. By the way the quality was pretty good, that new mic's working out nicely for you.

[Pestrator]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

Im diggin this track alot its nice. Its nice to listen to ur newer tracks bc you can tell your coming into yourslef as a rapper more. Liek your finding your voice more. Keep it up bro. I liekd the hook, it was nice and catchy. The lyrics were good, you had some feelings and connection to it, instead of just punchlines with no emotional connection. so thats good. I think the volume of the vocals nned to be turned up a lil, but other than that the mastering sounds on point. If you can you should also like go and play the song in your car, or anyones car to see how it sounds over those speakers, just to like see if it sounds good on diff speakers. overall good solid song, keep it up and I hope you get more time to record some music!

[wayneYMCMB]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

THP steppin his game up! haha. smooth track my dude

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

I'm feelin the beat bro. The organ sound is good for your voice. You remind me of Fabolous a bit, not sound wise just his laid back delivery. Your flow was perfect. I didn't like the hook very much, I think you could've come up with something better. I think it would have been better if it hadve been a longer song too, you may have mention something about that in the thread already but I didn't go back and check. Either the verse is still great, as far as mechanics you had the multies and metaphors down. Your verse also head a message, which is rare in Tha Studio. Good track man, I wanna hear another mixtape for you. By the way the quality was pretty good, that new mic's working out nicely for you.

Thanks man. And I didn't really do much with the hook, but I think it fit my verse well. Was basically saying; I speak the truth when I make music; but without saying it right out lol. I thought it was clever. I was gunna maybe do some effects on it, but I liked the simple feel. And I'm gunna work on a mixtape soon!

Im diggin this track alot its nice. Its nice to listen to ur newer tracks bc you can tell your coming into yourslef as a rapper more. Liek your finding your voice more. Keep it up bro. I liekd the hook, it was nice and catchy. The lyrics were good, you had some feelings and connection to it, instead of just punchlines with no emotional connection. so thats good. I think the volume of the vocals nned to be turned up a lil, but other than that the mastering sounds on point. If you can you should also like go and play the song in your car, or anyones car to see how it sounds over those speakers, just to like see if it sounds good on diff speakers. overall good solid song, keep it up and I hope you get more time to record some music!

Yeah, I feel you man. I feel like I'm finding 'my sound'. Its a really good feeling when I see how much I've improved, and how proud I am of my music. And yeah, I'm definitely gunna start checking my songs on more speakers before I release them now. Thanks bro.

THP steppin his game up! haha. smooth track my dude

You already know! Thanks.

[deliriousakadro]

Re: Noble - Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack)

Liking the track, cool laid back delivery and flow and fit to the beat well.
Flow - its gd i like the cool laid back delivery and how its unorthodox compared to a lot of people 4/5
Lyrics - pretty gd also , i like the mixin up of short and long lines 4/5
Overall - i like it and like that its a bit different in terms of delivery 4/5
(volumes fine thru my laptop)