RME OF ONE [Snippets]

[JAYRMe]

I will update this with snippets from my mixtape, please give honest feedback on all songs.

Jayrme ft Dro - Never Say Never [Snippet]

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JAYRMe- How Bout It

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JAYRMe- Keep It Comin'

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[indiglo09]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

Sounds pretty good but i couldn't really hear your vocals clearly, sounds like u got potential though. I'll be checkin for the mixtape

[JAYRMe]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

Sounds pretty good but i couldn't really hear your vocals clearly, sounds like u got potential though. I'll be checkin for the mixtape

Thanks Bro, once the mastered version is done ill update OP.

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New song How Bout It. Baby maker!

[pgathriller]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

@ 'How Bout It' - The beat is bomb, has a great cruisin vibe. vocals sit nicely in the mix but the delivery needs more emotion behind it, it's almost there but it needs that extra bit of confidence to give it that extra presence on the track. it's nice though man, nice smooth track

[mykill]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

How Bout It

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4.25/5, Beat is good. Nice selection on that one. Mood of your vocals are perfect for this beat. Mastering seems on point too. Lyrically its kind of bland, but they work well for song I guess. Chorus/Hook is done really well. Bumped it up to a 4.25 cause you can actually produce a song that's a song. Too many people spit random freestyles and shit and dont actually realize they need to put together several minutes of something that keeps people listening. Having a ear for producing in that light will keep you far ahead of your peers. That bridge (i think) towards the end was perfect. Keep working on that singing though lol.

Forgot to check these out when you posted them, but I'll give you feedback on the first when in a few

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Never Say Never

Flow: B-
Lyrics: C

Overall: 3.75/5, Dont like the autotune, of course, but your limited and direct usage of it works good. Keep doing things like that. Dont drown the world in autotuned rubbish. Good energy on your delivery. Good lyrics for the track. I'd like to see you improve on that a bit in the future, as you got the charisma and such developing on the mic, you just need better lyrical backing. Not saying you have to Talib or Mos Def with it, just a little bit more substance and better wordplay. Good track though. Like I said previously, your ability to put together a good track is what makes me want to download your tape when you're done. Actually songs > 16 Freestyles. Kudos man

[JAYRMe]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

@ 'How Bout It' - The beat is bomb, has a great cruisin vibe. vocals sit nicely in the mix but the delivery needs more emotion behind it, it's almost there but it needs that extra bit of confidence to give it that extra presence on the track. it's nice though man, nice smooth track

I know what your saying about the emotion, been trying to work on that think im getting better with it now.
Thanks for the feedback. +Rep

How Bout It

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4.25/5, Beat is good. Nice selection on that one. Mood of your vocals are perfect for this beat. Mastering seems on point too. Lyrically its kind of bland, but they work well for song I guess. Chorus/Hook is done really well. Bumped it up to a 4.25 cause you can actually produce a song that's a song. Too many people spit random freestyles and shit and dont actually realize they need to put together several minutes of something that keeps people listening. Having a ear for producing in that light will keep you far ahead of your peers. That bridge (i think) towards the end was perfect. Keep working on that singing though lol.

Forgot to check these out when you posted them, but I'll give you feedback on the first when in a few

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Never Say Never

Flow: B-
Lyrics: C

Overall: 3.75/5, Dont like the autotune, of course, but your limited and direct usage of it works good. Keep doing things like that. Dont drown the world in autotuned rubbish. Good energy on your delivery. Good lyrics for the track. I'd like to see you improve on that a bit in the future, as you got the charisma and such developing on the mic, you just need better lyrical backing. Not saying you have to Talib or Mos Def with it, just a little bit more substance and better wordplay. Good track though. Like I said previously, your ability to put together a good track is what makes me want to download your tape when you're done. Actually songs > 16 Freestyles. Kudos man

How Bout It- Yeah the singing is something new im trying to do, on this song it came out okay but on this new one im working on it fits the beat real good.

Never Say Never-Thanks Bro, i'll keep what you said about the lyrics in mind in the future. Appreciate the fact you actually took time to give me detailed feedback, much love Bro +Rep.





Edit: Updated OP with new song, "Keep It Comin'"

[mykill]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

Keep it Comin'

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4.5/5, Mastering on this thing is f'n amazing. Everyone out there, getcha pencils and pens out. I'm taking notes my damn self. You do it all on your own? What programz? Flow had a few dips down on the 2nd verse. Chorus is kinda repetitive, but that thing is VERY VERY catchy. Good work with that. From the sounds of it you have a pretty HIGH QUALITY, IMPRESSIVE, well put together EP coming up. I think you've become one of my HQ favs real quickly and unexpectedly. I guess its that raw musicality in you. Good work man. Very good work!

[JAYRMe]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

Keep it Comin'

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4.5/5, Mastering on this thing is f'n amazing. Everyone out there, getcha pencils and pens out. I'm taking notes my damn self. You do it all on your own? What programz? Flow had a few dips down on the 2nd verse. Chorus is kinda repetitive, but that thing is VERY VERY catchy. Good work with that. From the sounds of it you have a pretty HIGH QUALITY, IMPRESSIVE, well put together EP coming up. I think you've become one of my HQ favs real quickly and unexpectedly. I guess its that raw musicality in you. Good work man. Very good work!

No bro my dude does all the mastering for me he is getting real good at it. We use Mixcraft to both record and master on but not for long as soon as we have the money we upgrading and getting a Mbox and pro tools which is gonna make things a whole lot better.

Thanks man really appreciate it, as soon as it my EP drops ill be sure to PM you a DL link.

[broc717]

Re: RME OF ONE [Snippets]

ay man I'm feelin your flow and whole swag you have about your music, its catchy my dude


if I had to point out anything to work on, it would be your emotion in your delivery and at some points, your lyrics, stay wit it tho and keep on ya grind!

check my new track game over if ya getta chance!