some love lyrics

[Vocker]

these lyrics are for "in the morning" song by J cole, and i think the lyrics kinda flows with the beat, but u choose.
okay here we go (rate of 10 if u like).


"Today I wake up, and your the only thing that i thought.
Had a good dream in a sea, your with me in a boat.
But loving ya is so cold that I cant hold, need a coat.
I wanna say I love you, but its stuck in my throat.

you know that love is a show, but I cant afford the ticket.
for you its me against the world, but im gonna risk it.
I tried to open your heart, but you really locked it.
i looked every where for the keys, but i couldnt find it.

for you, I'll take my heart and put it in a golden necklece.
If love is a company then I'll get fired out of that business.
its suppose to be happiness, but whats good off this.
you know that everybody whats to get the queen in chess.

My love to ya will last forever like a tattoo in my chest.
Ofcourse god is first, but your second in my love list.
let them call us love birds, and we can chill in the nest.
baby dont worry I got the hole world in my fest."

If you got till here, thank you for reading my lyrics
dont forget to rate

[Nastykid]

Re: some love lyrics

They're pretty deep,I like those lyrics.
Good luck,keep it up man..

[Tha Professor]

Re: some love lyrics

hahah, to be honest that's pretty gay

"Ofcourse god is first, but your second in my love list."

smh

[FuckTheFeds]

Re: some love lyrics

ima keep hood, say fuck it to the love,
ur white as some doves, and im gutter as some mud,
ridin around with the dirty in the trunk,
now thats not love, thats not love,
and my momma is the only one that can judge,
lookin back, i was in some stuff,
pockets were never broke,
but its the law that can take your throat,
put all your hopes on choke,
laughin now, but it aint no joke,
i watched bodies float,
dump off the side of the boat,
its are world we control,
keep ahold, cause if you dont who knows

[Dukez]

Re: some love lyrics

your concepts are just ok....

but the way you put your words together is what you need to work on.... you need to sound slicker

If love is a company then I'll get fired out of that business.
its suppose to be happiness, but whats good off this.
you know that everybody whats to get the queen in chess.


you have ideas...like a queen in chess but the way you word youre shit is stagnant and boring.... KEEP AT IT THOUGH you'll def get better.

in the meantime check my shit:


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...aving-you.html

[Nastykid]

Re: some love lyrics

I would give it a 7/10,as i said before not bad but they don't seem to be deep enough for me.

Oh and i hated this line
"Ofcourse god is first, but your second in my love list."
It made me LOL

[Vocker]

Re: some love lyrics

They're pretty deep,I like those lyrics.
Good luck,keep it up man..

damn thanks man for real

hahah, to be honest that's pretty gay

"Ofcourse god is first, but your second in my love list."

smh

lol ya i know, they were alittle cheesy

ima keep hood, say fuck it to the love,
ur white as some doves, and im gutter as some mud,
ridin around with the dirty in the trunk,
now thats not love, thats not love,
and my momma is the only one that can judge,
lookin back, i was in some stuff,
pockets were never broke,
but its the law that can take your throat,
put all your hopes on choke,
laughin now, but it aint no joke,
i watched bodies float,
dump off the side of the boat,
its are world we control,
keep ahold, cause if you dont who knows

these are some real dope lyrics man

your concepts are just ok....

but the way you put your words together is what you need to work on.... you need to sound slicker

If love is a company then I'll get fired out of that business.
its suppose to be happiness, but whats good off this.
you know that everybody whats to get the queen in chess.


you have ideas...like a queen in chess but the way you word youre shit is stagnant and boring.... KEEP AT IT THOUGH you'll def get better.

in the meantime check my shit:


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...aving-you.html

thank you ALOT!, i will try to improve the way i write, but sometimes i add extra words in between so i try to keep the flow...but ill do wat u told me tho

I would give it a 7/10,as i said before not bad but they don't seem to be deep enough for me.

Oh and i hated this line
"Ofcourse god is first, but your second in my love list."
It made me LOL

thanks again, and about that god line...i just love god