We Back soon 20 barz

[Dukez]

Enjoy!
the "---" signifies a breath.

Egg white Benz
Catch me sittin in the asshole
Black raybans grey vans I got some hash rolled
Roll the window down puff a cloud n let that ash blow
Hiphop need a spine tell that bitch I'll be her backbone

I got this rap on lock you rappers need the passcode
Try my date of birth or the day they put me in the dirt
Haha
Now come on tell me you ain't heard
I'm a cancer to the rappers bout to thin the fuckin herd

Permanent forever cemented I will be mentioned as the best muthafucka alive until the end of it
And that's a bold statement comin from an outsider
--But thats my POV i know you see me at the TOP

Uhh
I ain't a mathematician but if you sit up n listen I teach you simple addition
you got me plus the beat plus some swisher sweets haha
--Thats RIP to the muthafuckin competition

--Add the fact that you could never see my aim n vision
Silly muthafucka we ain't rappin in the same division
Haha
I'm in a bed ridden condition
Cuz my flow so ill they'll pull the plug if i keep spittin

[Glen F Baby]

Re: We Back soon 20 barz

Wow, if these are your first-time lyrics, then I must say that I'm super impressed. Was the flow always on point? Not all the time in my eyes, but flow sounds good as long as you say it write, so if you're able to say your lyrics and had it flow with the beat then who am I to argue? But yeah anyways great lyrics for a first timer, if not then still good lyrics keep it up! If first time: 7/10. If not: 5/10

---------- Post added at 07:30 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:27 PM ----------

Also, another thing, LOVED your rhyming scheme, made it sound real nice.

[Dukez]

Re: We Back soon 20 barz

thanks bro, nah it all flows but its hard for a reader to figure it out lol

nah its not my first time, ive been writing since Feb 2009.

[Glen F Baby]

Re: We Back soon 20 barz

Yeah I didn't get the flow for a while, and oh well nonetheless good lyrics. Keep it up, and check out my stuff dood

[kfadahunsi]

Re: We Back soon 20 barz

Enjoy!
the "---" signifies a breath.

Egg white Benz
Catch me sittin in the asshole
Black raybans grey vans I got some hash rolled
Roll the window down puff a cloud n let that ash blow
Hiphop need a spine tell that bitch I'll be her backbone

I got this rap on lock you rappers need the passcode
Try my date of birth or the day they put me in the dirt
Haha
Now come on tell me you ain't heard
I'm a cancer to the rappers bout to thin the fuckin herd

Permanent forever cemented I will be mentioned as the best muthafucka alive until the end of it
And that's a bold statement comin from an outsider
--But thats my POV i know you see me at the TOP

Uhh
I ain't a mathematician but if you sit up n listen I teach you simple addition
you got me plus the beat plus some swisher sweets haha
--Thats RIP to the muthafuckin competition

--Add the fact that you could never see my aim n vision
Silly muthafucka we ain't rappin in the same division
Haha
I'm in a bed ridden condition
Cuz my flow so ill they'll pull the plug if i keep spittin

thats fucking sick man