Mafia musc

[Dukez]

These are 36 barz to Rick Ross' classic mafia music

--Yes I *wanna be famous
My aim is to pave the way and make it to ya playlist
Money cars hoes all the weed I can smoke bucketloads of green and pray to *god we never see a tag on our toes

--tell me what youre life like
they say I got a mean style I say please don't bite mine
---I got money but I'm tryna live the lifestyle
G6 with a coupe 5Gs on a suit

Kickin me advice man fuck what I should be
My 16 tight like underage pussy
--I spit scenes right out of a fuckin movie
And these other rappers amatuers in a bushleague

Haha
And I know it sounds cliche
--I murder beats ask the track see what he say
--Fuck beef i eat rappers like lean steak
-- I ain't lion check my mane clean shave ha

I'm in this shit now Ima kill I gotta
And these others dudes Persona non gratta
--this shit is timeless man you're ass ain't been invited
We be going all in call the waiter get the Wine list

One life to live
better make the most of it
Poster boy for money honey you know I be loafin it
Like the smell of green?
Step a lil closer bitch
when i spit it for your girl i spit it tight i might Choke the bitch

--But will I ever find girl to give my heart to
Swear Ill have her back like a Vicky secret bra do
--But perfect girls live in films and go to art school
So I let these hoes amuse me for a while like cartoons

Haha
But I'm thinking i should call her
Ass stickin out Like lipstick on a collar
No commitments girl
I can't be bothered
single forever like Washington on the dollar

Haha
An my flow is just slaughter
Someone call up Wayne feature me on tha Carter
--that's primetime a chance of a lifetime
I feel so alive like mountains on a lifeline

[Glen F Baby]

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I love that Single Washington line. I like that cartoon line too. Other lines...well were decent but they flowed so OK verse I guess. But you should really try to start writing lyrics that relate to you, I try my best to do that, and when I notice that it doesn't relate to me, I take it out immediately and replace it. Like in my Bomb verse. I had a line "If you're still Ima shoot you, no camera man". Decent line, but doesn't relate to me because I don't own a gun, nor have I ever held one in my life. But yeah you understand where I'm coming from, right? Just write lyrics that relate to your life

[Dukez]

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yeah i never ever have gun talk in my lyrics ...that was just punchline rap because i think its more fun for people to read and comment on.

I can give you some real storytelling flavor if you want lol

[Glen F Baby]

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Lol but still ya know like try to stay within yourself, otherwise you're gonna become fake like Weezy and Drake and stuff. I'm tryna be real and still have good punchlines like D-Pryde or something

[UnknownP]

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Lol but still ya know like try to stay within yourself, otherwise you're gonna become fake like Weezy and Drake and stuff. I'm tryna be real and still have good punchlines like D-Pryde or something

@ Glen F Baby "i'm rap's GOAT" is that to stay within yourself, being real and not being fake?

dukez, you did a really good job. you stayed on topic, handed out a couple of good punchlines and finished it off well!

i'll give you a 3,5/5!

[Glen F Baby]

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@ Glen F Baby "i'm rap's GOAT" is that to stay within yourself, being real and not being fake?

dukez, you did a really good job. you stayed on topic, handed out a couple of good punchlines and finished it off well!

i'll give you a 3,5/5!

It's very similar to saying "I'm the shit". You can say you're the best and stuff, that's not exactly being fake. But when you talk about having guns, fucking hoes, and getting money, that's when it's all fake and overdone.

[UnknownP]

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It's very similar to saying "I'm the shit". You can say you're the best and stuff, that's not exactly being fake. But when you talk about having guns, fucking hoes, and getting money, that's when it's all fake and overdone.

to me, saying you're rap's GOAT is being fake. i'm the shit is nowhere that.

if you're saying that you're rap's GOAT, that's shit's is defined. saying i'm the shit, you haven't defined what kind of shit you are homie...

and i'm just saying, these are your lines:

"Pistol in my draws, better watch out when you blow me,"

"And damn my paper long something like a college essay"

"I'm a deep sleeper so I sleep in her pussy,"

"And I got money so you know I'm living Kobe's life"

"Do her from behind I call that a bounce pass,"

"My hoe is on her knees like she's praying at mass,
She goes nuts on my dick saying "Finally at last!" "

so i'm just saying, no disrespect, but don't talk about being fake, please!

edit: FYI, you calling weezy fake and the things you mention that is fake, is real to wayne. he's been in jail for the possession of a gun, he's fired a gun too. he's getting money, and he's fucking a lot of bitches. so i don't know what your definition of fake is. i'm not hating, i'm just trying to understand

[Dukez]

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haha thanks @unknownp ....that's why I didn't get what Glen was saying... my lyrics are slightly exaggerated but at the end of the day its punchline rap, im not storytelling, and idk why glen said that im being fake lol his lines ....as you pointed out....is very contradictory to what he calls real.