LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

[mrr3ye5]

Hey guys here is my verse submission to "Joey Dejesus Contest", i would appreciate it if you "LIKE" and support my verse, and help me get a winning chance to get my name out there.. thankss in advance

-LaNNy

YouTube - Joey DeJesus Feat. (LaNNy) - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix)

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[Glen F Baby]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

Hey nice man check mine out my name is Omamba2410

Flow: Was on point and just amazing. I dunno...I'm at a loss of words regarding your flow on this beat.

Punchlines/Similes/Metaphors: Sometimes when people have great flows, that usually means that they focus too much on flow to have good lyrics, but you actually had some good lines. Impressive man, keep it up!

Overall Lyrics: Lyrics were related to the topic, flow was on point, some nice punchlines. Great balance.

Other Notes: Try to become the best lyricist ever man, try to be a little more clever in your lyrics. Not much I can say though.

Overall/Rating: 9/10

[pgathriller]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

Flow is nice, vocal line sounds a little dry though; could use some really light reverb, almost an unnoticeable amount. Needs some doubling and more subtle adlibs. just some stuff to give the vocals are bigger presence. delivery is dope and the flow has a nice aggressive to it that's not overly done and works well with the beat. nice work man, keep at it

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

Hey nice man check mine out my name is Omamba2410

Flow: 10
Punchlines/Similes/Metaphors: 6
Overall Lyrics: 10
Other Notes
Overall/Rating: 9/10

I have to say...I was surprised by your flow, but in a good way. Not much for me to criticize you about on this except...change your picture? Lol it looks a little funny considering the face you made, haha. Well, I wish I could give you some constructive criticism so that watt you could improve, but I don't even think you need it. Great job!

haha.. yeah i should change it.. o well lol.. thanks for the feedback man, imma peep yours

-LaNNy

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Flow is nice, vocal line sounds a little dry though; could use some really light reverb, almost an unnoticeable amount. Needs some doubling and more subtle adlibs. just some stuff to give the vocals are bigger presence. delivery is dope and the flow has a nice aggressive to it that's not overly done and works well with the beat. nice work man, keep at it

Thanks for the feedback man, yeah it does sound dry now that you mentioned it haha...btw when are you gonna throw me one of your beats, so i can bust a free verse on your dope shit? ahah

-LaNNy

[Gibbsy]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

sick man i liked it , the cuts in the hook are sick deffo some tight production your quality is real nice to, if anything i woulda liked to of heard more anger in your delievery coz that is what the beat to me at least is kinda asking for, but nah other than that tight work man!!
4.5/5 !

[mykill]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

Flow: B-
Lyrics: C+

Overall: 3/5, Lanny you got a lot of my respect when I heard your Audio Battle freestyle. Had to check this one out again. I think you're a very creative guy (especially your production skills). Lyrically on this one, I think its missing something. You put forth a great effort, but there were some bars that were just jumbled up. The rhyme scheme you went for was perfect. I think its something that you could use to give you that definitive style people would enjoy from you. But maybe you need to step back and make sure everything is in order, before you go with it cause that verse to me isnt saying much of anything. Just using -ine a bunch. You got a very HIGH bar to live up to in my book. This aint it. Good effort though man.

[MC_Crary]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

This is the first proper track Ive listened to from you, dont know if you posted anymore stuff before this. I heard you Audio Battle Submission and thought that shit was on point bro. This is a good track, not up to the caliber of the other track but still pretty good. You have pretty decent quality compared to some of the othr artist in the studio. You best feautre is your flow. Youre capble of the lyrics from what Ive heard but you dont show it as well here. Checking out your tacks on Youtube now.

[mrr3ye5]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

@ Gibbsy, Mykill, McCrary: didn't expect this great of a feedback specially from you guys, thank you for your input i'll be sure to grow from what you tell me,.. i appreciate it alot.

-LaNNy

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

Nice quality
nice delivery and flow in this.
more practice to define it to your best ability.

lyrics were good , but u can tell some parts u was just trynna rhyme and it didnt make sense or was just random.

overall 4/5 , keep it up.

[JSmooth]

Re: LaNNy - Wrong Era (Youtube Allstars Best Rapper Remix Submission)

Flow- 4.5/5 I can tell u put time into and it paid off
Lyrics- 4/5 like diezel said the lyrics were good but some stuff didnt make sense
overall- 4/5 nice job bruh keep it up