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  • YouTube All-Stars Contest Entry - Mr. HAM

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uiTw4xHmG_k

    Lyrics are in the description. Remember to comment and like if you do end up enjoying it!
    Last edited by Glen F Baby; 04-11-2011, 08:15 PM.

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    Re: YouTube All-Stars Contest Entry - Mr. HAM

    If you guys haven't yet, check out my video in the link above! Don't forget to like and comment!

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    • #3
      Re: YouTube All-Stars Contest Entry - Mr. HAM

      read the rules first then maybe you will get feedback
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      Props to Woocky

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        Re: YouTube All-Stars Contest Entry - Mr. HAM

        flow aight, need to be more fluid, wit more emotion - 3.5/5

        lyrics decent , and fit the subject of the hook - 4.5/5

        overall 4/5


        keep workin, and get a new mic for better quality.
        EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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        • #5
          Re: YouTube All-Stars Contest Entry - Mr. HAM

          Anyone else wanna check this?

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          • #6
            Re: YouTube All-Stars Contest Entry - Mr. HAM

            wheres your feed links ? okai ill feed this but you need to feed other people before dropping your own,

            Okai shit, truthfully this isnt great, your mic quality is worse than mine, i cant really make out what your saying?
            lyrics from what i read are pretty good, but you need to work on your mastering and your quality. its hard to make out your lyrics when listening to the song man

            overall 3/5


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            • #7
              Re: YouTube All-Stars Contest Entry - Mr. HAM

              Flow: B-
              Lyrics: C

              Overall: 2.75/5, Not a bad attempt. You did a fairly good job staying on beat while using a iPhone to record. Lyrics are decent. Appropriate if nothing else. A lot of simplistic bars here, so maybe do a bit more research and think a bit harder next time when crafting your rhymes. Hopefully when you get a mic we will hear more out of you. Maybe get to hear you do a few tapes and what not. Thanks for posting Glen!

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