Gibbsy - Speechless

[Gibbsy]

Yo LilWayneHQ!!
i took a little break from recording material, i had over 30 songs to choose from for my new mixtape and this is the 1st single ill be droppin'
hope you enjoy this one,

YouTube - Gibbsy© -Speechless (HD)

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P.s Anyone lookin' to get on my following mixtape holla at me,

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

Would be nice to recieve some feed!!

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

so yo i fed loads and not recieved any back :O

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

Decent beat, Nine Diamond's tags are unbelievably cuntish though, I don't see how these producers don't realize it has a negative effect when you tag anymore than at the start and end of beats. People using the "they lose money" excuse make me want to punch them in the face, people who buy beats will buy them, those that don't, won't, therefore tagging them and ensuring less exposure to the producer's sound is a dumb ass move IMO. Not to mention when they comment on the Shadowville message boards, a lot of the producers seem like they are unbelievably unintelligent from the way they speak, which agitates me since thick people making money annoys me for some reason lol.

ANYWAY lmao sorry about that ridiculous rant, it was barely relevant but I had to vent haha.

The hook is hot, good switchup on it halfway through changing the melody. Your flow is good IMO, lyrics are solid, though that line about disease and cure must be 70 years old lol However I'm pretty sure I've used it myself down the line so I'd be a hypocrite to call you out. I enjoyed the topic of the song too and the way you embodied it with your lyrics. One thing I really ain't a fan of was your own "shoutouts", through 3/4 of the hook in some cases lol, completely unecessary, I'd stick to just shouting out "Gibbsy" just before verse 1 once, and at the end as it's fading out or something similar, it grates to hear an almost DJ level of shoutouts

Anyway overall I liked it, apologies for the waffling and semi-irrelevant feedback, and also for taking so long to get any feed on this track.

3.5/5 for me - Zig

[Pestrator]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

pretty good song bro, i like the concept of the song and u rode the beat nicely. Your flow was on point all throughout but there was like a line that u wee off in but it wasnt really noticable. Lyrics were good as well. Keep it up bro. 4/5

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

wahey thank you for the feedback yall!! Z! thanks man i appricate that level of feed always worth reading and i understand what you mean about the shoutouts haha and pestrator thanks for the feed yo!! and yeah i did drop off flow just once haha i noticed that to but only after i released the track an bit late then ahahah, thanks tho yo' really appricate it!!!

[mykill]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 3/5, I've been kinda lazy with the feedback lately. Let's start off my barrage of feedback with Gibbsy. Chorus/Hook: Was alright. Delivery on this one was pretty good. You ever get a new mic? Still sounds like the other old one. I think it would improve your music tenfold if you'd just get a new mic, because sometimes I cant even understand what you're saying. That aside, I think verse 1 was better lyrically than verse 2. Your delivery on verse 2 was way better than 1 though. Try to stay consistent and you'll be good to go. Great job, yet again Gibbsy. Let's hear that tape!

[mrr3ye5]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

haha i dig this,.. chorus is catchy man, lyrics flow tight with the beat, i say you should of attacked the verses more softer, or gradually build to that aggressive style you got. Good stuff man.
Lyrics: 4/5
Flow: 4/5
Delivery: 3-4/5
Overall: B
-LaNNy

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

thanks you everyone mixtape drops today later on, took alot longer than i hoped but its on its way yall got some big names on it too

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

Voice - I think that you could try to get a new mic, or some better mastering.
Beat - Was hard, I liked it.. Nice choice..
Lyrics - Was great, I like the realness to what you speaking about. Great work. Not many artist do that anymore.

Overall - 5/10 because of the mic I took away a lot of points. But other than that it was good work.

[pgathriller]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

this is dope man, where's the hook from? already on the beat?

anyway, track is bomb, recording quality needs to be upgraded so you can really unleash on these tracks though man but the delivery is on point, nice and solid and you maintain a nice emotion on the track; gives it a very passionate vibe. beat is ill too, is that "Chris Mecca" I heard in the tag? cause that dude is solid for sure

keep at it man, coming together nicely man, just step up the quality of the recordings man!

[ATLien666]

Re: Gibbsy - Speechless (Im back Yall, Mixtape droppin this weekend)

I definitely like this. It's single material for sure, catchy hook, and people can relate to the lyrics, props.

Flow: You rode the beat nicely, and everything flowed well. Delivery was really good and expressed emotion well. 4/5

Lyrics: You did a good job, kinda reminded me of songs I make, aha. But in a good way, it was definitely real, stuck to the topic and delivered emotion. You didn't get off topic or try to go out the boundaries of the song. Then again, there wasn't any lines that made me rewind the song or get all speechless, but I didn't really expect any on a song like this, but yk. 3.5/5

Other: Audio quality was a lil' low, so I think the beat kinda overpowered your vocals, other than that, no complaints.

Overall: 3.9/5