Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

[CoMau]

Let me know how you guys like this freestyle. I don't care if its negative feedback or not! (I need some coaching)


-Cody Mauer

Link : Spinning Deeds Freestyle by Cody Mauer on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

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[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

You need to leave proper feedback man, before posting. The proper way of leaving feedback is in Tha Studio rules.

[mykill]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

Flow: C
Lyrics: D

Overall: 1.75/5, This is horrible. You're rapping about smoking weed on a beat that belongs on a Miley Cyrus album. I dont even know where this beat is from, but its dumb. Sounds like someone's going to the Prom in 1980. You need to work on your flow, sound more fluidly on the mic like you're talking to someone face to face instead of like a robot. You need to work on your lyrics, dont rap about weed unless you smoke weed on the regular. You'd do better if you'd rap about the stuff in your life, or stuff you know. If you're in school, rap about school. Way better than jumping on the Weed Rap bandwagon and trying to be Wiz Khalifa. You also need to make better beat choices, and I'm not saying that the beat you used for this isnt good for someone, its just not good for you or it doesnt mesh well with your lyrical content. How's that for feedback?

[XTaCiDe]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

Flow: D
Lyrics: D-

Overall: 1.5/5 This is not good. Word-to-word connects are not made, just awkward pauses. The lyrics are nothing new; just more weed rap. I felt awkward listening for some reason. (Please, do not take too personally, just giving what you asked for - FEEDBACK)

EDIT: This beat is also sickening.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

there's a niche for this, dont let them discourage u, they not ready for your revolution.

i actually like the beat, has a good feel to it.

its a nice freestyle , which i love doing as well.
u rode the beat good too.

continue to rap about whatever u feel.

spread your music, and there will always be someone that likes your stuff.

keep it up man.

[pgathriller]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

flow is a little monotonous; need more emotion and presence on the mic. the cuts in the beat are awkward and need to be smoothed out. put more emotion into the flow and give the flow more dynamic range and less pauses. i was actually diggin the overall vibe of it though, i mean, with a better flow and proper cuts in the instrumental this could be a nice summertime freestyle beat, but the proper execution just isn't there on this one man, keep at it though man, takes time.

[Tha Professor]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

I dunno.
1.2/5 overall? Look, just keep practicing
"Repetition is the Father of Learning" - Lil' Wayne

[MC_Crary]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

I didn't absolutely hate this. I felt like the beat was just a backdrop, you were just using as something to rhyme over. The lyrics could use work as fromn as technicals, but if that's what you wanted to spit about its you man. The flow definately could use work, but I see potential. With memorization of your lyrics you would already start to sound better. A new mic or better mastering would help also. Keep working, you have potential.

[JSmooth]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

Flow- 2/5- needed a little more emotion
Lyrics- 3.5/5 nice lyrics keep it up
Overall- 2.5/5 keep workin

[ATLien666]

Re: Cody Mauer - The Spins Freestyle

Flow - was horrible, you had the monotone, beginner flow. You're reading off the paper, cause you're definitely not freestyling. 1/5

Lyrics - Was eh. I hate weed rap, I hate it, so I'm biased on this. 2/5

Other - I could see Wiz on the beat.

Overall - 1.5/5 Keep tryin'.