Two JHEYSLAY tracks

[XTaCiDe]

****For all giving feedback, I request that in your feedback post you please critique the first song [IGNORE MINDLESS YELLING IN THE BEGINNING OF THE SONG] for lyrics and the second one for flow. Thanks.

JHEYSLAY - WWF


JHEYSLAY - That's That


Feedback #1

Feedback #2

[mykill]

Re: Two JHEYSLAY tracks

Thx for following the rules this time. I'll drop you some feedback tomorrow. I'm sleepy now.

[XTaCiDe]

Re: Two JHEYSLAY tracks

Woops, disregard my PM. -_- I'll be looking forward to it, thanks.

[XTaCiDe]

Re: Two JHEYSLAY tracks

Bump.

[mykill]

Re: Two JHEYSLAY tracks

WWF
Flow: B // Lyrics: A+ // Overall: 3.75/5, Good punches in this one. The yelling kinda was aggravating and distracted me from listening. But other than that the lyrics were really really good. Put to some music it would be picture perfect.

That's That
Already Posted Feedback on this one

These could be really good with better mastering. I like how you're trying to do Hip-Hop tracks over the commonly equated Swag Rap joints people post on here a lot. Lyrically I think you got it. Flow seems stable enough. Try to get that mastering and recording up to par and you could make some serious nice tracks. Cheers.

[XTaCiDe]

Re: Two JHEYSLAY tracks

This is one of my friends spittin', not me. Appreciate the feedback though. Almost done listening to that mixtape of yours, will leave feedback sometime tomorrow most likely.

@JHEYSLAY

[XTaCiDe]

Re: Two JHEYSLAY tracks

Bump.