Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

[Pestrator]

Re: Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Thanks for the feed Pestrator, felt like I wanted to make the verses seem like I was talking to a crowd of people and the hook was just the hook of a song. Know what I mean? Thats why the mixing's like that.

oh okay yea i understand, I also like how u added like the interviewer on there, i thought it was part of the beat.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

hook: needs some work wit the fluency of it, but its decent. quality kinda rough on the overall vocals, they might be slightly clippin. overall mix needs tightenin to be level wit the beat, seem like u might be louder. flow kinda stiff,.... lyrics decent and went wit the theme. the announcer thing was a nice addition too. 3.5/5, good work bro, u the champ now, and u gettin massive feedback, good job.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Flow - Was almost flawless. You can definitely tell you write to the beats now.
Lyrics - Liked them. No complaints.
Other - Mastering and quality was pretty good. Hook was slacking though. Not sure what is was. Probably just 'cause you repeated two lines over and over.
Overall - 4/5.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Thanks for the listens. Diezel I heard your freestyle over the beat. Flattering to say the least, I'm already inspiring remixes and remakes, love it. Seems like the hook was the part alot of people wasnt feeling too much. I feel like thats a good thing because in this I definately went more for the lyrics than anything. I definitely slacked off as far as technique on third verse but that was more of an ode to some friends I grew up with. I'm pretty surprised no one has called who the interviewer on the hook is yet.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Thanks for the listens. Diezel I heard your freestyle over the beat. Flattering to say the least, I'm already inspiring remixes and remakes, love it. Seems like the hook was the part alot of people wasnt feeling too much. I feel like thats a good thing because in this I definately went more for the lyrics than anything. I definitely slacked off as far as technique on third verse but that was more of an ode to some friends I grew up with. I'm pretty surprised no one has called who the interviewer on the hook is yet.

I thought it was obvious it was Mykill lol.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Lol guess you got a point. People found it so obvious they ignore it.

[ATLien666]

Re: Hall of Fame-MC_Crary (First single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Damnnn, this is really good. You definitely had the most improvement on this site.

Flow: I was listening to some of your old songs earlier on my iPod, and I can definitely tell the improvement, it's immensely better. You can tell you write to the beat and this flowed really well, except at some parts towards the end of the verse/beginning of the chorus, other than that, props. 4/5

Lyrics: Went with the theme of the song and the interviewer topped everything off. I likey.

Other: Chorus was the worst thing about this song, it was only two lines repeating, but still, it was ehh on delivery. Idk how to really explain it, but it didn't really sound chorus-y, you know?

Overall: Like the song, can't wait for the mixtape. 4/5