Yung N Ruthless - Welcome To Swag Gang City

[YungNRuthless]

Welcome To Swag Gang City..

Well I haven't been here for a while, and I don't know if I'm fully following the rules right but I thought I'd post some of my newest stuff here, I've been working in a studio now a lot more has changed flow, lyrics, style a lot stuff, and I'm looking for collab's for mixtapes of mine, and If you guy's want I'll do verses for ya'll..

Welcome to Swag Gang City
YouTube - Yung N' Ruthless - "Welcome To SwagGang City" [Prisoner In Cell 709]

& another new feature I did (Money & Hoes)
YouTube - LsK ft. Yung N Ruthless - Money & Hoes


Here is a couple of open verses if ya'll wouldn't mind jumping on check em out.
Take A Flight (Open Verse)
Antidote (Open Verse)



FEEDBACK 1
FEEDBACK 2

[mykill]

Re: Yung N Ruthless - Welcome To Swag Gang City

Flow: C+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 3/5, I think lyrically you've kinda stepped it up a notch. That chorus on "Welcome to SwagGang City" was garbage though. You need to put more effort into that. Your feature verse was f'n great, keep it up. I like your speedy flow on the first song too, but there are noticable dips and dives there. Overall enjoyable listen. Good job man. Glad to see you still popping up from time to time.

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Yung N Ruthless - Welcome To Swag Gang City

Flow: C+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 3/5, I think lyrically you've kinda stepped it up a notch. That chorus on "Welcome to SwagGang City" was garbage though. You need to put more effort into that. Your feature verse was f'n great, keep it up. I like your speedy flow on the first song too, but there are noticable dips and dives there. Overall enjoyable listen. Good job man. Glad to see you still popping up from time to time.

Thanks a lot my kill!... and that hook was really made by Eminem haha I just copied it. Didn't wanna write my own, just wanted verses, but I also didn't want Eminem on the hook so I just redid it.

[pgathriller]

Re: Yung N Ruthless - Welcome To Swag Gang City

interesting, any particular reason you did a beat from like 05? I like the beat, just kinda random

anyway,
flow could be tightened up, feels too loose in general and the hook doesn't flow smooth enough. particularly like the lines "they all know game", i like it should repeat "welcome ya to swag game city" instead of the different line, it doesn't fit for me. you have a nice presence on the mic though, delivery has emotion in it and you're really "into" the track which is good, just need to vibe with the beat more and stay on mark throughout the track and it'll start to come together man; keep at it

[Tha Professor]

Re: Yung N Ruthless - Welcome To Swag Gang City

Ya, it is a pretty old beat.
Lyrics are aiight i guess, but as mykill said, the chorus is pretty fucked. At least you delivered this with a lot of energry, but personally, this beat is too fucked for you in my opinion. Keep hustlin' tho
2.75/5

[JSmooth]

Re: Yung N Ruthless - Welcome To Swag Gang City

flow- 3.5/ 5 for the most art nice but not a lot of variation
lyrics- 3.5/5 nothing spectacular but they make for a nice song. great energy 2
overall- 3.5-5 nice track, havent heard ur other stuff so idk if youve improved
swaggang city