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  • LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel (Submitted Late)

    LaNNy Vs. Yung Diezel
    Battle Type:Audio
    Rounds: 1
    Bars: Unlimited
    Topic: Free Topic
    Track: Lil Wayne - Cannon

    VOTERS FORMAT
    Winner:
    Reason:
    Flow:
    Overall Lyrics:
    Other Notes:

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    LaNNy: http://hulkshare.com/raeg5cc54mmt
    Lyrics:
    Excuse me mr. diezel, you weeny, wayne, biting Wiesel
    hunt you down with a little loaded cannon
    drag you down roadkill, for my famine
    gobble yo words with my rap gasm's
    i'm full of it, better think of new shit, wasted my spit on yo' dry ass rappin'
    words deeper than yo' skins crack, a-hole gas'n
    lookin like a crackhead, man
    this shit,ha, got me laughin' gaspin' dying for air
    breathe again homie, admit you can't keep up with the flash-man
    sucka whats happenin'
    on the go, your just another fake, late on time
    can't post up with a fast killa rhyme
    like mine, but not enough to give up to a weak line, like yours
    cuz yo shits fire, if your cooking yummy chocolate smores
    sorry to diss so hard but on the real you's a dick riding whore
    no or's, to phony dudes that bite with no credors
    betta pay up to weezy's voice, had a choice
    but you chose to rap with his style but not yours
    your better off rapping his songs, rather just making random noise
    im kickin my time, cuz you's a waste
    im humming my shit, *hum* *hum* in yo face
    check yo self, cuz i think the man in the mirror just got erased
    so show up, to man up, face me
    but don't try and jock this MC
    to real to see, silicone is what you be
    if you surf on my swag, homie
    so i gotta speak the truth, don't be
    mad cuz thats what O.G's do
    remember who i be, the dude
    L, A, Double N, Y
    this dude just murdered you


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    Yung Diezel:http://www.limelinx.com/files/7f4e47dc8300d1448b64cfaea0d3ab23

    commentary:

    aye aye b,

    who the fuck they got me battlin b, ??
    they got me battlin this guy lanny.
    i dont know if he white, chinese, asian , or spanish...
    lemme just say this b......

    lyrics:


    i imma cut his legs off, now he not standin bruh,

    or, he can get hit wit the canon no camera,
    i had a knife, razorblade, and a gun,
    then i told him keep it cool, but i aint aint a fan of ya
    bitch quit the gibberish, i aint understandin ya.
    i'll merk ya insides, but i aint talkin temperature(thermometer mercury)
    (gunshot) its like that, then im done,

    IM DONE!!!..


    i dont see how these pussies can hate outside the pussy

    u cant even get in.


    ** second verse free off the dome freestyle of the day , followed by shameless plug

    Feedback:
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/26717-gibbsy-speechless.html

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/26877-hall-of-fame-mc_crary-first-single-from-no-surrender-no-retreat.html

    Last edited by mrr3ye5; 04-22-2011, 03:40 PM. Reason: VOTE NOW!!

  • #2
    Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

    Once again, he doesn't submit on time lol.



    protect dunston at all costs

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    • #3
      Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

      Lanny, that was really weak tbh..
      Where's diezel @?



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      • #4
        Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

        Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Post
        and its due at midnight tonight.
        Someone is over 12 hours late. Disqualified?



        protect dunston at all costs

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        • #5
          Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

          haha.... alright.. well his is up now....

          ---------- Post added at 07:27 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:26 PM ----------

          Originally posted by Tha Professor View Post
          Lanny, that was really weak tbh..
          Where's diezel @?
          thanks for the feedback meng, but please be more specific bro.
          -LaNNy

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          • #6
            Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

            Winner: LaNNy
            Reason: Better flow. Better lyrics. Submitting on time. Had a longer verse.
            Flow: Really liked it, original too.
            Overall Lyrics: Liked them. You went in on a nobody haha.
            Other Notes: We still need to work on doing a collab LaNNy.



            protect dunston at all costs

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            • #7
              Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

              Originally posted by THP850 View Post
              Winner: LaNNy
              Reason: Better flow. Better lyrics. Submitting on time. Had a longer verse.
              Flow: Really liked it, original too.
              Overall Lyrics: Liked them. You went in on a nobody haha.
              Other Notes: We still need to work on doing a collab LaNNy.
              thank you Noble,.. and to be honest.. now i know he's a dick rider for sure judging from his lyrics, not to be hating...
              and yess, the collab is coming =], puttin' lyrics down.. then imma send it to you sometime next week my brotha, ohh yeahhh
              -LaNNy

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              • #8
                Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

                Winner: Lanny
                Reason: Felt you went in, and were more official with it.
                Flow: i aint gonna lie, ive said i like ur fast flow... and i know u can do it well, but this one was weak... u switched up too much idk... it was good at some points but then u lost the tempo or sum'n.
                Overall Lyrics: Pretty nice there.
                Other: Diezel's first verse was nice, but too short, then the "off the dome" freestyle was pretty wack tbh. I respect hes up to battle anyone tryna get better but yea... it wasnt really tht good.

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                • #9
                  Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel(Not Submitted)

                  Originally posted by Jamerson View Post
                  Winner: Lanny
                  Reason: Felt you went in, and were more official with it.
                  Flow: i aint gonna lie, ive said i like ur fast flow... and i know u can do it well, but this one was weak... u switched up too much idk... it was good at some points but then u lost the tempo or sum'n.
                  Overall Lyrics: Pretty nice there.
                  Other: Diezel's first verse was nice, but too short, then the "off the dome" freestyle was pretty wack tbh. I respect hes up to battle anyone tryna get better but yea... it wasnt really tht good.
                  i didn't even know, he had a little off the dome freestyle.. lol.. but thanks for the feedback man i appreciate,..admit that verse felt rushed cuz i was trying to be consistent with meeting the midnight deadline,... buttt Diezel didn't end up following through on time...-__- oh well, next time haha

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                  • #10
                    Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel (Submitted Late)

                    Thanks for listening guys.

                    Listen to the end of my track after the verses, thats my main focus. Lol.

                    If anybody else wanna battle, lets do it.

                    Im free all weekend.

                    Lets get some more views lol.

                    I love the battles, cuz they always get like 100+ views.

                    EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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                    • #11
                      Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel (Submitted Late)

                      This is a battle thread. I cut the freestyle off the end of the song. Sorry.





                      protect dunston at all costs

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                      • #12
                        Re: LaNNy(Submitted) Vs. Yung Diezel (Submitted Late)

                        Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                        This is a battle thread. I cut the freestyle off the end of the song. Sorry.


                        wtf!? i didn't even hear that shit moefucka! what the fuck are u doing noble.. comon man, this is OUTRAGEOUS

                        nah srsly tho, diezel can u send me the full version please



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