JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

[JSmooth]

This is my first song I've posted here. It's my first single off my upcomin mixtape "Summer School'n"
WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE THE FEEDBACK

Stil on My Grind- LimeLinx - Preview - Still On My Grind.mp3




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[THA GR8 M8]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Flow - You flowed on beat nice. You seem very confident on the mic.
Lyrics - Pretty good, nothing 'wow' worthy though.
Other - Good quality and effects. Definitely a nice remix. Keep it up.
Overall - 4/5.


Also, thanks for joining and actually following the rules. You got talent. We need some more rappers around here.

[JSmooth]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it. an yea no problem just doin my part

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it. an yea no problem just doin my part

Hell yeah. The more you feedback you give and the more you show your face in this section, you 'll get more feedback. Keep dropping good songs.

[mykill]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Flow: A
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4/5, Dont like some of the random pauses. Mastered really well. Good job J. Verses lyrically are put together really good, the redo of the hook is good as well. This is a really good track man. What software are you using to record and master?

[JSmooth]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Hell yeah. The more you feedback you give and the more you show your face in this section, you 'll get more feedback. Keep dropping good songs.

will do, will do

Overall: 4/5, Dont like some of the random pauses. Mastered really well. Good job J. Verses lyrically are put together really good, the redo of the hook is good as well. This is a really good track man. What software are you using to record and master?
thanks bro, ill drop some more soon

[MC_Crary]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Prepare for my peak, ain't lookin forward to my slope.
If i fell off, I landed righ back on my feet.

You went in on this one man. Great bars. I gotta get you on my a track of mine lol. The mastering was pretty good too. Good to have another talented artist around mine. Welcome to Tha Studio bro.

[JSmooth]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Prepare for my peak, ain't lookin forward to my slope.
If i fell off, I landed righ back on my feet.

You went in on this one man. Great bars. I gotta get you on my a track of mine lol. The mastering was pretty good too. Good to have another talented artist around mine. Welcome to Tha Studio bro.

preciate that bruh. once i finish up the project im workin on now we can for sure collab.

[Gibbsy]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

first off the beat is sick that just like raw has a nice vibe to it, ya flow is pretty decent lyrically its on point too!!
quality is good to im likeing the delivery to looking forward to the project if your guna drop it on here
over all 4.5/5

hook is sick too!!

[Z!Greatest]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Top notch shit, real presence on the mic and handled a powerful beat easily. Mastering was superb.

Good flow throughout, couple of pauses weren't really necessary but I thought your flow was great throughout.

Lyrically it was above average, but played it too safe with the punchlines and content, though on a remix of a Lex Luger banger it hardly gives itself to inspirational material. Some solid punchlines, though a lot of them seemed reworded versions of shit I've heard a lot of people saying lately.

Hook did it justice too, nicely done.

Overall gonna give you another 4, which is good for a remix. Very impressed by your opening salvo of efforts and long may the quality continue.

[Pestrator]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

damn this is a raw remix bro, you def have a sick flow n good precense the quality is good n u have some good punchlines. Good remix bro keep it up. 4/5

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: JSmooth- Still on My Grind (If I Die Today)

Some solid punchlines, though a lot of them seemed reworded versions of shit I've heard a lot of people saying lately.

everything has been said already, thats why i dont even pay attention to that anymore.
even lil wayne says stuff i heard other rappers say, or even underground rappers said before.
but its all about how they say it and delivery and emotion.
jsmooth is nice with that aspect, becuz it sound like he crying in all his songs and his voice is kinda whiny, but i feel his emotion, so its good to me.