Dark Story-Telling Type Beat

[pgathriller]

New beat I made called "Time Bomb" that's a little dark but I think would be a nice story-telling type beat:

SoundClick artist: AfterTouchBeatz - page with MP3 music downloads
(5th beat on the page)

What do you think of it?




Feed Links
[http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ype-beat.html]
[http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...es-5-a-m.html]

[ProBitaz.]

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Sounds cool.

Really wanted to hear Cudi over this.

[mykill]

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Variety: A-
Composition: A

Overall: 3.25/5, Not as dark as was advertised. The chimes make it seem too poppy. I see some Avril or Britney singing over this talking about a love they lost or something. Not someone talking about how they almost go killed one day by someone mugging them or anything really dark. Good beat none the less. Man, you've gotten amazing at production since you started posting on here. Nice work!

[Pestrator]

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raw beat bro!

[pgathriller]

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thanks for the feed guys!

@Mykill - Agree with what you're saying for sure, didn't really know how to categorize this one, it's a bit generic so I just kinda imagined what type of rapper I'd like to see on it but I definitely understand where you're coming from man; thanks for the feed man, good to hear you diggin the direction I'm taking my music and how I'm improving!!

[SachmoJones]

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I gotta agree w/MyKill on the dark false advertising, but not because of the chimes, because of the tempo. I thought it had all the right parts but was too uptempo to tell some dark sh!t over. Otherwise I thought everything worked together nicely.

[MC_Crary]

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I like this beat a lot man, I expected it to be a little darker though as my brother mentioned above. I could definately see myself spitting a story to this one though you know what I'm saying. he progression just gives it to you. I could hear Tech N9ne murdering this shit. The changes in the drum pattern would be nice to flow to also. The mastering of the beat sounds pretty good, all instruments seem to be at good levels. Remeber I can only give feedback from an MC's perspective. I dont know anything about production lol.

[pgathriller]

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thanks for the feed guys!! agree on it being a little too fast, might go back and drop down the tempo a bit but good to see you guys could still vibe with it!

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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sounds good.

nice choice and amount of sounds in there, and the levels sound good.

you are pretty consistant with your beats, and u definately improving, good work man, and u have a variety with sampled and composing, dope.

keep it up bro.

[Gibbsy]

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great beat homie the intro is sick, could hear this touched up wiht some crazy bars man!! nice work your beats are too sick i actually would love to get on this beat man aha 4.5/5 keep um coming homie!!

[pgathriller]

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@yung diezel - thanks man! good to hear you appreciate my improvements! trying to release a new beat every week from now on; we'll see if I can keep up with my schedule and keep improving!

@gibbsy - thanks man! gonna try to keep churning 'em out!