Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

[MC_Crary]

Fuck MC_Crary

With the release of the second single from No Surrender, No Retreat I also announce the pushback of the release date. NSNR will now be released on May 23rd, 2011. Two more singles to come. Cover art and tracklist will be released with the next single.
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[Jamerson]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Flow - cool, liked how your changed/slowed up along with the beat.
Lyrics - good stuff like always.
Other - 2nd verse was my fave. Really nice outtro haha

You have a really good mic, but your vocals need mastering so they blend in with the beat just right.... if not, it sounds like a freestyle on the radio you get im saying? and also the hook, like u didnt switch up the flow much, but a different sound to the vocals there wouldve made the hook stand out...

[MC_Crary]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Thanks for the feed Jay, I'm working on changing my mastering style. Thats one of the reasons NSNR's been pushed back. The second verse was my favorite too. Next single's Off the Wall btw.

[Coleon]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

That album art looks like it was made for a Super Nintendo game lmao

[Sentus]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Beat was sick, I would have went for a faster flow but that's just me, what you did works to. Lyrically it was pretty good and your delivery sounds better than it did before. This album should be dope.

Chorus was pretty bad, only critique really.

[Tha Professor]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

i thought tha hook fitted with everything, like flow n shit.. but making lyrics about how you're improving is something i wouldn't have done, cuz, peeps should realize that anyways.
But ye,
i fux wit mc_crary

[MC_Crary]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

I really appreciate the feedback guys. Sentus, Ive noticed my hooks are kinda boring, thats one of the main things Ive been getting. I'll work harder on those for the next album. And Proffessor, I felt like the track was more of a never give up type song. I feel like alot of people hate my music, so this song addresses that. The first verse is basically saying why so much hate, I'm just doing me. The second verse is about how people hate one me, but still listen to the music. And the third verse is bascally saying fuck you if you say fuck me. I mean there are a couple of illusions to how I feel like Ive improved and I only say things that Ive been told by other people. Moral of the this paragraph is that I felt like I was praising myself, just a few lines about noticed improvement. Again thanks for the feedback guys. Hope I can get some more.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

hooks are the most important part of songs, so u shouldnt delay working on those until next album. u should work on those now.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

A very true statement sir. Probably the only real feedback you've ever given me. Thank you.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Flow - Was really good. Glad you're improving in this department, 'cause honestly, a few months back your songs were so bad because of your flow. I guess its good you started writing to beats, it works for you.
Lyrics - Pretty good. A few cool lines, nothing too insane though. Would like to hear more multies. You got good wordplay most of the time.
Other - Quality was good, but I agree with others, the hook is slacking. Come to think about it, you've always been a bit weak on hooks. It usually just seems like your hooks are just bridges most of the times, rather than being hooks. So work on that. The ending could've been cut shorter imo.
Overall - 4/5. Keep it up.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Fuck MC_Crary-MC_Crary (The Second Single from No Surrender, No Retreat)

Thanks for the feed Noble. Another thing that helped with my flow is that my vocals were always like a half sec or so off. I don't know if it's due to my mic, soundcard or what.