J-Smooth-Summer School'n (Mixtape)

[JSmooth]

Here it is everybody my Summer School'n Mixtape. Please give it a full listen and feedback. I feel like it's my best work.


Here's my website, go here to just give it a listen. It's under the music tab
Wix.com JSmooth created by antevans1117 based on Craft Com New

If you want a download go here. The datpiff link is there now to.
http://www.datpiff.com/J-Smooth-Summ...pe.228516.html
LimeLinx - Preview - Summer School'n (official).rar

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post470032
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post470046

[Jamerson]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

Just listened to "Lesson 9" (first track that came out)....
I'm impressed, full review coming soon.

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Summer School'n Review

Lesson 1 - Quick intro was cool . Flow was a killer, beat was nice, and your lyrics were pretty good. There was here and there where your flow dropped but nothing big.

Lesson 2 - Autotune doesnt bother me much, could deff enjoy it on a hook. Flow was good solid again, hook nice, lyrics cool. Diggin the cockyness as long as its not in every song .

Lesson 3 - Found a few flaws in the mastering (connecting bars, specially in the begining of the hook), flow is on point, lyrics sounding a lil repetitive but still good. Liked what you did with the hook.

Lesson 4 - Guessing you really like the beats weezy gets on haha. Flow still cant complain, lyrics are cool .

Lesson 5 - Some good multis, inception line was dopeeeeeee haha. I like your mastering, you master all ur own songs? and that line about you not writing and find quote or w.e. what do you mean?

Lesson 6 - Flow is versatile, ive seen technically a diff flow on every track, nice. Giving me head/ punk rocker" line was real nice

Lesson 7 - Liked the concept, "long enough for you to get it... get it " line, nice.

Lesson 8 - Less impressive flow on this one still good nonetheless, maybe it's just because i think wiz did everything that couldve been done with this beat. Lyrics were good.

Lesson 9 - Probably my fave song, lyrics, flow, concept, masterin was all good. Real stuff as well so thats a plus.

Pretty solid mixtape, i think u handled the beats well, you voice sounds kinda different, wish there was more specific tracks with ur own hooks and stuff (I know u did your own hooks for some). Also I think you're good enough to hear u on original beats. Maybe some more ad libs wont hurt lol, Uhmmm yeah, glad i checked you out... keep it up brah ; collab soon?


btw what equipment do you own?

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

put it on datpiff when u get a chance.

the navigator on that site isnt working well with me.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

@lil chukie- I added the datpiff link
@jamerson- Thanks a lot bruh for the in depth review. I appreciate it. On lesson 5 I said "I dont write no mo, so unless u read WAV(like the music file) u wont find the quote" Basically since i dont write the only evidence and way to catch the meaning is in the audio.

The datpiff link also has an extra song on there.

[Jamerson]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

ohh i kinda assumed that but just wanted to make sure... everyone saying they dont write, and take days to write a quick 16 lmao. But if you dont forreal, great talent. keep it up

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

Yea i usually write but for this mixtape i didnt.

[MC_Crary]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

Clicked that thanks by accident lol. Anyways, I'll get a full review tomorrow man. Been working alot.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

wassup, u dont have to give a full review of my mixtape but feedback on a song or 2 would b great. Appreciate it guys.

[MC_Crary]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

The into track is pretty good man, if youre not writing on rhyming straight through that's great man. True freestyling is a lost conept. I may have said this before but you sound alot like Meek Millz man. Good beat selection on this one too. Very epic. The Lecture is a well put toether interlude. The soundbites fit well. The accapella on the beginning of Lesson 1 is fire man. Another great beat selection on this one. Fuck niigas that say southern niggas ain't lyrical man. Youre spittin again man. I'm gonna review more, just done fo now lol.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth-Summer School'n(FULL MIXTAPE)

The into track is pretty good man, if youre not writing on rhyming straight through that's great man. True freestyling is a lost conept. I may have said this before but you sound alot like Meek Millz man. Good beat selection on this one too. Very epic. The Lecture is a well put toether interlude. The soundbites fit well. The accapella on the beginning of Lesson 1 is fire man. Another great beat selection on this one. Fuck niigas that say southern niggas ain't lyrical man. Youre spittin again man. I'm gonna review more, just done fo now lol.

Appreciate that feedback man. I look forward to ur review of the rest of the mixtape. All feedback helps me improve.