Pyro- Back to the basics

[xXPyroXx]

its a rough recording i changed things up and i just want to know people's general opinion on it

LimeLinx - Preview - Back To The Basics.mp3

Feedback 1
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post480992
Feedback 2
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...nce-floor.html

[Gibbsy]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

start off by saying sick choice of beat man, need a docter is heavy!!! like how your flowing fast the flow is pretty sick man, but i find sometimes its hard to understand what your saying coz your breathe control sounds a little sloppy in places odiviously spittin on an em track is like crazy hard but i think you did a real good job on this man nice work lyrics are pretty tight too!! 4/5 man keep droppin!

[pgathriller]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

diggin the flow style you're going for but it needs to be cleaned up; you pause in odd rhythms and it does make your lyrics hard to vibe with and the cut edits are too obvious, you can clearly tell a new take comes in, doesn't flow together smoothly (particularly at 1:43 and 2:23) i like the style and i know this is a rough so hopefully you're gonna go back and rerecord this to smooth everything out, it could be a sick jam if you're able to clean it up; keep at it man

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

thanks for the comments i can actually learn from them cause i havent finnished the song yet

[Pestrator]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

The beggingni was good but when u started to o faster it was hard to understand wat u were saying, also u r gonna need to up the volume of ur vocals on the final draft, i agree with wat after touch said, but this has a lot of potential, im really digging it just clean it up and ull be set.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

Like your attempts at choppin bro, but you gotta have the clarity to go with it. Theres definitely potential there. Youre getting all the words out and such, but its just not flowing right. Maybe you fuck around with the vocals and make it work as is but it may need to be completely rerecorded.

[WeeZy iZ RaaaW]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

nice flow man, i agree about the clarity tho, keep it up!

lyrics: 5/5
Flow: 4.5/5
overall 4.5/5 (itl be 5/5 once rerecorded )

[Konflikt]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

Flow: I feel your trying too hard to rap quickly. It means your not pronouncing your words properly. When you slow it down it's much better. You ride the beat well.
Lyrics: The message is a good one and it makes it easy to connect to. Dope stuff.
Other Notes: Great beat choice, great hook but a little rushed at times
Overall/Rating: 8/10

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

thanks for taking the time to comment guys i really apreciate it i hope the finnished song will benifit from it

[@WHOZMERCY]

Re: Pyro- Back to the basics

Flow: I feel your trying too hard to rap quickly. It means your not pronouncing your words properly. When you slow it down it's much better. You ride the beat well.
Lyrics: The message is a good one and it makes it easy to connect to. Dope stuff.
Other Notes: Great beat choice, great hook but a little rushed at times
Overall/Rating: 8/10

I agrree with what he was saying But at the same Time Im feeeling the Flow but it, Keep it up man you got something.