Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

[DeadCivilian]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Alright bro quick question then, are you REALLY a Blood?
If so, are u in L.A. & what hood?

yeah my nigga straight damu me and my niggas round here ride tre 4 da 5 sense i was born whole family blooded up.

Where u at tho? L.A?

nah da lou

Oh alright, I stay in Bloods hood & I was tryin to see if u was from that hood but I guess not

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Alright bro quick question then, are you REALLY a Blood?
If so, are u in L.A. & what hood?

yeah my nigga straight damu me and my niggas round here ride tre 4 da 5 sense i was born whole family blooded up.

Where u at tho? L.A?

nah da lou

Oh alright, I stay in Bloods hood & I was tryin to see if u was from that hood but I guess not

oh yeah i rep it but really all into it bt rep it kz my WHOLE fam is. bt yah i need FEEDBACK on the Track not "blood affiliation"

[Patriarch]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Its not that I DONT WANT FEEDBACK. its just i get tired of the weezy this and weezy that. listen to what im saying now and how IM flowing. get weezy off ur mind for 3 mins and listen to this without comparing. and i am doing me im not doing no damn weezy dude. bt if thats ur op. fine with me i'd say ur right. B/C ITS UR OPINION. thanks but no thanks.

Fair enough. In my opinion, your voice is shrill and irritating and your flow is slow and simplistic. You have like three words in the entire song with more than 2 syllables in them. The hook is abrasive and repetitive; I'm sure that, had you tried, you could have come up with something better than the same two words repeated over and over.

Also, that's a nice blue and white hat, blood.

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Its not that I DONT WANT FEEDBACK. its just i get tired of the weezy this and weezy that. listen to what im saying now and how IM flowing. get weezy off ur mind for 3 mins and listen to this without comparing. and i am doing me im not doing no damn weezy dude. bt if thats ur op. fine with me i'd say ur right. B/C ITS UR OPINION. thanks but no thanks.

Fair enough. In my opinion, your voice is shrill and irritating and your flow is slow and simplistic. You have like three words in the entire song with more than 2 syllables in them. The hook is abrasive and repetitive; I'm sure that, had you tried, you could have come up with something better than the same two words repeated over and over.

Also, that's a nice blue and white hat, blood.

Thanks. Oh and if u would have "really" looked at the picture u would see that i have the picture in "negative"? if u know what that means. so it will come up blue even if it were "Red".. get it? good. peace. im done talking to you.

[Patriarch]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Of course. So it's better to make your entire body appear blue...
It doesn't change the fact that you own a blue hat and a blue bed.

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Of course. So it's better to make your entire body appear blue...
It doesn't change the fact that you own a blue hat and a blue bed.

dude the hat isnt blue it looks like that because its negative dumbass

[Patriarch]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

No, it looks red with the negative colors. When the colors are reversed, like so

You can clearly see that you are wearing a blue hat and have a blue bed behind you. Screaming the word "negative" a million times doesn't make you any more right.

[trillphill]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Its not that I DONT WANT FEEDBACK. its just i get tired of the weezy this and weezy that. listen to what im saying now and how IM flowing. get weezy off ur mind for 3 mins and listen to this without comparing. and i am doing me im not doing no damn weezy dude. bt if thats ur op. fine with me i'd say ur right. B/C ITS UR OPINION. thanks but no thanks.

Fair enough. In my opinion, your voice is shrill and irritating and your flow is slow and simplistic. You have like three words in the entire song with more than 2 syllables in them. The hook is abrasive and repetitive; I'm sure that, had you tried, you could have come up with something better than the same two words repeated over and over.

Also, that's a nice blue and white hat, blood.

i love you no homo man haha.
and yea sounding like another artist is something you just don't look over when grading someone's flow, i mean damn out of everyone in the rap game if he can say you sound like wayne then you must be tryin.
Edit* and the person in that pic is ....

[VveeZy]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Daaaaaaaamn Patriarch clowned this nigga though hahahahaha real rap dawg you aint gotta be a blood or a crip to go hard, quit fakin ya shit and just be real, cas niggas that is smart liek Mr Patriarch over here will shat all ova you and proove you wrong like them damn lawyers in the court rooms (fuck them niggas) no offense patriach lol You a Lawyer in the makin haha.

oh and sh4dow,,, .... why u aint rreply? lmfaoo

[VveeZy]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

No, it looks red with the negative colors. When the colors are reversed, like so

You can clearly see that you are wearing a blue hat and have a blue bed behind you. Screaming the word "negative" a million times doesn't make you any more right.

looks like his walls are too there patriarch haha

[VveeZy]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

That was fucking awesome, you seriously have got some skills

Your voice and flow went with the beat and I did LOL at you putting the Empire tags on it

also,, too bad the empire wasnt even the DJ for Im Raw...... pfft sweet rip kid, stay in school.

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Lil Wayne Im Raw... my version

Good...
nice