Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

[Tha Professor]

Yo, back with another track, this one is only with me.. the end product with have 1 or 2 features. But you can tell me what you think of my part and the beat ect ect.
Thanks y'all

Download / Stream
Hulkshare.com Can U Feel Me Z.mp3

Lyrics
[HOOK]
Zurich baby, I know how you feel
Zurich baby, I know how you feel
When we're chillin at the lake feeling what's really real
I'm praying to god at night that he can feel meh
That he placed meh with freedom like this
You might think its nuttin but its fuckin bliss
Hold the applause till I finish my speech
Bitch i see the world, its in my read

Zurich city, the place i was born and raised
painted it green looks like i blazed
Treating myself to quadruple deck sandwiches
I can barley speak the muthafuckin languages
Nah not ignorant just fell in love with chillin
chasing our dreams in circles, like a dawg
You would think that, but nah, we get passed the fog
Cuz instead we're runnin' around the diamonds
gettin home runs, Mama i need my seconds
Professor E can't wait for breakfast
Hungry as a muthafuckin horny rapist
Jack, Where u at, dawg this is black and white
Me and Charlie Chaplin smoking Kryptonite
The Bustin' freestyles just cuz i can
Bam, Confusing y'all like a plan

[Hook]

I used to be the kid that never gave a fuck
Had the tux hangin' in case i got the luck
And courage to ask, a girl I liked, out
But then something happened I psyched out
On too much swagger that was fucking emerging out of me
10 mac-11's ready kill ya from the balcony
Oh, was too based? can u see the swag?
No lag, ain't slow nor even half fag
Playing around with the limit, its below my shoulders
That means my brain's gone, I'm acting colder
Like Jehovah, when I witnessed the straight lying
Of him selling mystical bibles and signing
His autograph down with a fountain pen
Hustlin', sold about 7 mill Ten
Fuck Charles Russel and his family
Get out, We need fucking harmony

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[Jamerson]

Re: Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

flow - needs to improve. it wasnt bad just
lyrics - i like you dont try to be simple, but sometimes stuff doesnt make a lotta sense. I still enjoyed 80% of the lines in the second verse which was the best.
other - beat is mehhhh... maybe thats wats affecting your flow, not having the right beat. your voice is cool btw, havent really noticed it til now.

[Tha Professor]

Re: Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

flow - needs to improve. it wasnt bad just
lyrics - i like you dont try to be simple, but sometimes stuff doesnt make a lotta sense. I still enjoyed 80% of the lines in the second verse which was the best.
other - beat is mehhhh... maybe thats wats affecting your flow, not having the right beat. your voice is cool btw, havent really noticed it til now.

Thanks for listenin' Tunes been trying to improve this flow issue but it could be the beat, maybe some small just need to be added to make it hot tho

[Tha Professor]

Re: Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

bump... ye--

[Artille]

Re: Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

flow - On point for the most part.
lyrics - Were pretty good overall, but nothing that really stood out to me.
Overall - 3/5 Not a bad track, but nothing great. Maybe the other features can make it better though.

[mrr3ye5]

Re: Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

Flow: Was on most of the time, but you fall off hard when you ain't on point
Lyrics: Good, possibly wanna switch some words out to make it sound more full
Other: Watch your breathing
Overall: Potential to be a great song, fix a couple problems and its good
3.0/5

-LaNNy

[JSmooth]

Re: Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

flow- 2.5/5it was alright but u dropped off every now and then and u ran out of breath once or twice
lyrics-3.5./5 stayed consistent and were pretty good
overall- 3/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: Professor E - Can U Feel Me Z (Prod. Professor E)

I said this in your last thread, but it holds true here too. There's something about your music that makes me like it. This one has a bit more of central focus than your last song, but you still go all over the place with it lol. Good job producing for yourself, the beat fits. I'm still trying to understand your theme or whatever but I like what I've seen so far.