Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

[Konflikt]

This is the first single off my mixtape 'That Slept On Kid' coming This Summer.

Shouts to my dude Deon for a dope verse.
http://soundcloud.com/konflikted_add...oken-feat-deon
Download deon broken mp3 - broken.mp3

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post489615
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post489622

[indiglo09]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Really cool song man, u singin the hook? I really like the guitar melody and overall feel of the song. The guy with the verse stole a few lines haha - Drake "Seven days without love makes one weak".

[Gibbsy]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

not bad heard the beat before, the sample is johnny cash i think, or something like that, this is pretty sick, i like the vibe an delievery but yer those drake bars ahha nice work tho man, 4/5

[Jamerson]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Flow - amazing dude, you sound different, right energy, good delivery, cool! Nothing to change.
Lyrics - nice rhyme scheme, nice multis. good stuff, a song youre actually saying something.
Other - you're new right? looking foward to hear more of your stufff, real nice.

[Konflikt]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Really cool song man, u singin the hook? I really like the guitar melody and overall feel of the song. The guy with the verse stole a few lines haha - Drake "Seven days without love makes one weak".

Lol nah. I'm a producer. I sampled the hook from a guy called Glen Hansard.

not bad heard the beat before, the sample is johnny cash i think, or something like that, this is pretty sick, i like the vibe an delievery but yer those drake bars ahha nice work tho man, 4/5

It samples Glen Hansard 'All the Way Down'. Yeah, my man Deon ripped it tbh.

Flow - amazing dude, you sound different, right energy, good delivery, cool! Nothing to change.
Lyrics - nice rhyme scheme, nice multis. good stuff, a song youre actually saying something.
Other - you're new right? looking foward to hear more of your stufff, real nice.

JTYLK- Im not the rapper. Thats my man Deon. Thanks for the feedback tho.

[Jamerson]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

ohh.. ohh... damn. Nice beat tho!

[Konflikt]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Thanks for the feedback dude

[P.K.U. Beats]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

good beat man
there is a great atmosphere in the song
like the melody a lot

[Konflikt]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Thanks Dude!

[Konflikt]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Bump ba-bump bum bump

[mykill]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Feedback is for the beat + song concept

Variety: B-
Composition: A

Overall: 3.75/5, That Deon guy sounds good on the beat and he compliments it well. Nice moody track. Good snares, etc as well as the sample is done very well. Great effort to put this song together. A lotta people dont know that I dont necessarily wanna rap, I just love music and putting together tracks like this a la Dj Khaled or Dj Drama style is what I'd rather do. So kudos to you for this one man. Great job!

[Konflikt]

Re: Konflikt- Broken (Feat. Deon)

Thanks man.

Sidenote: My next single is coming in a couple weeks. Beat is 10X harder than this.
#GETREADY